This is a great story, but I think that the childrens' ages are their names in a different launguages. Like Una's name is like Uno whitch means 1 in spanish. Just FYI!

Bwoohahahahaha! Ah this is quality.

So adorable! I especially loved the last bit with little!Septimus... Thanks for sharing and have a happy holidays!

Lol this qas too cute! :) i loved septimus and primus. amazing job you captuerd the scene perfectly.

Really cute _

HAHA :) that was hilarious, and cute. great job

Wow. Really really funny! D

*giggles* Oh, that was cute.

Very good! I like how you have the children as children - not understanding what they are being told, and yet taking what they do understand and making a general mess of things. Having the story take place in the winter is very fitting, as it is rather difficult to hurt other people when there's snow to cushion them, and it does put your story at a distance from the activities of the book. I like how Una is portrayed here, as simply a non-threatening (and also loved) child, who is protected from the fatal futures that her brothers must deal with. It also explains in a way why the king didn't notice her missing for years - she just wasn't that important to him.

Haha! This is very cute, and I love it. The image of the princes as young children... you captured it very well. Good job!

LOL.

This was totally cute. I'm adding this to my favs...

Oh my; this was brilliant! I loved it! And it was so perfectly in character of the brothers! I'm adding this to my favorites!

nomg thats cute!

"Quintus, you do /not/ kill your /sister/..."

XD

I can see the lord of stormhold doing that-and here children, is an ideal place to burn your brother to death, and over there is a brilliant stabbing spot, and so on, and so forth. Very funny, and I liked it a lot.

Aw!

"You fall!"

That was adorable and hilarious. I loved it, brilliant idea and very well-written!