What this story is, is an incredible piece of art. It should have been an episode.

Not bad for a crossover story. If you do another one could you give Iolaus a little more sense. If you remember correctly his pride almost had nemisis kill him.

just lovely

It was a very exciting story. I liked it.

Well, good grief. You lead me on, and then Gabby and Iolaus don't even get together in the end! The ending was a bit abrupt, but other than that, good story. I like the plot line.

I loved this story! Wonderful job! :)