i love this! it's jsut the right mix of fluff and suspense. I can very easily see seto acting like that.

i love this one shot, it is still in character for Kaiba yet kind of fluffy at the end which i think is hard to do. well done and please write more for this couple

Good idea but not enough info. I suggest that you continue it. If not, ok. Nice job though.
-YnG

what happened

Well, I'm not quite sure what to make of this...but one thing is for sure. I have so many quetions! One of them being, exactly what was this story about? Serenity worrying for Seto? Some random people attacking Kaiba's mansion? A bad day? Seto not wanting Serenity to worry about him too much? What? And if she knew he might have been lying, why didn't she press him?


Anyways the only way to explain this story is,Intriguing. Truly.

OMG! so, so, so many questions! it was really good and quite original i enjoyed it. kinda wish there was more than just one chapter. but anyways, it was great!

I can't believe you left it like that! How could someone manage to penetrate the Kaiba Mansion and actually attack Kaiba? Who was it? What happened to them?

So many questions!

Wow, just wow. Wonderfully done. I love it.

o very nice. great job. :)

Oh this is a great one-shot.
Too bad it's not going to be continued.
Cheers.

Thanks for wrting this, original idea. Write more some times.

Such a nice one-shot!