not bad make anther one!

Yay! You used my suggestion! I liked how shy Rei was in this one (mainly because I myself am way too shy to ever make the first move.) And Kai responded to Rei's coming-out perfectly. He thought things through and made the first move cuz Rei is just irresistible, hehe. But yeah, I really liked how confident Kai was.

And "Aiyah!" is an awesomely cute word. My mom's friend (who's about half a foot shorter than me) uses it all the time.

It is indeed very sweet. I can feel my teeth rotting as I type. XD Yey for Kai/Rei! Keep writing!

this was so cute!! good jop!

That was sweet. I liked this story so I'll "favourite" it. The plot was good, and the ending was adorable and perfect. I liked the part where Kai nudged Rei. I can't really come up with any constructive critisism, so... bye.