that was one of the saddest, most well written things i've ever seen.

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Very, very twisted! And you made one teeny-tiny boo-boo: Jake's family is Jewish.

*sob* Scary, sad, and well written.

I soooooooooooooooo love this story! Awsome job!

Really strong..beautiful. I can honestly say that I cried...*sniff*

it was o.k not the best very sad

Very good

Oh Gosh, that was something. Very bold and powerful speaking. That was pretty damn good.

Wow. That was powerful. Quite rushed in some areas, and it could have been longer and more in depth, but it was a GREAT story. I love the whole mystery thing, but how could Cassie take a Yeerk's word? Maybe Tobias was still alive, and he *tried* to get her to kill herself? Hmm, that would make an interesting sequel. If you do it can I be your Beta Reader? Please? Anyway, bravo! (Except for that one scene, this didn't really need the R rating. PG13 for violence, maybe?)

That was a little twisted but good none the less. I noticed that at the part where Cassie finds Ax dead you repeated yourself. You said she did her homework and chores and ate dinner. Then after they buried Ax she came home and ate dinner and did her homework. And once or twice you said Tobias demorphed to human, which he can't do because he's a hawk in his true form...or at least now he is. Hey! Stop throwing rocks at me! I'm sorry! Truthfully I can't right a story for beans but I'm good at correcting them, so if you ever want me to correct a story for you email me at . By the way good story. AHH! ::runs away from the rotten food and stones::

Ginny, dear, HONESTLY. You'd think you could have them just a lil' upset over at least SOMEONE'S death.. But everyone was just to monotone. "Oh, that's so sad" and "Oh no, he's dead" just don't work very well. Sorry. (

Whoa. This story sounds a little cliche, but I still got into it. Maybe it's because I seem to have a taste for stories tlike these _. However, I didn't really get into it, because something seemed...off with it. It seemed like you were telling and not showing what was going on, and when each of the Animorphs died, the reactions didn't seem as catastophic as I felt it should have been. But the story was still well-written and thought out; maybe you can work on it some more. My mailbox is always open if you'd like to talk about it; e-mail me at

That was depressing