A great story. Very funny.

This is really cute!

So cute! Like I said. Hope everyone else likes it as much as I do!

cute

Aww, this was so incredibly cute! I could just see it all 'playing' out. Loved it.

Oh, that was so sweet! What a great game of adventure and excitement. It’s “Let’s Pretend” time! Makes me wish I were six years old again.

Keep writing!

~Star

This is such a cute funny story! You're always so terrific at incorporating humor into your writing. I love the funny reveal at the end too. :p

Wonderful writing as always from a wonderful author!

OMJ so cute and lol! Love it ^^

That was so sweet! I love how you blended the two realities--a bit like the fantasies in Calvin and Hobbes.
This captures all the fun and chaos we love about Pirates.

That gave me some chuckles.

Did you base this on any real kids you know?

Aww, cute! ^_^