This was so great... So fascinating and AMAZING...

JENNIFER

looking forward to reading and reviewing

NICE!

I have a question. What happen to Rosalie?? I mean u didnt include her nor mention it when Bella went over to the Cullens house. Plus with super vampire hearing and Alice's visions why had she not seen the treatments wont work? Im not criticizing your work im just wondering abt the loose ends.Dont take offense.

aw i just read your whole story and im sad its come to an end i hope you make a 2nd one to this please

I love this story! You're a fantabulous writer :)

Love it! Sounds really good. Its smooth-flowing, nearly flawless. Keep Writing!

:) i really luved da story it was really awesome!

Beautiful story. :')

I really enjoyed reading this story. So sweet, so sad. Good work!

:) me liking dis story lolz

I loved this story!

Okay, so far I am loving this story!! I realize you wrote this story some time ago, but it really would be amazing to read this from Edwards POV. Just an idea if you are ever bored to death :)

Very emotional and sweet story! I like how you ended it, although I guess I would have preferred this one chapter being spread out into a few more. BUT, I like the story very much and am pleased you finished it when Edward was going in for the bite. I liked that. Thanks for sharing this with us!

I enjoyed this very much. I finished it in one sitting. Hope you write a new one soon. It was a very different spin on how Bella & Edward meet.