 theoneandonlySPK 2009-10-26 . chapter 3dude..i wish i knew what happened next xD this was awesomely written. good job :3 |
 Double L 2009-04-05 . chapter 3 You should seriously make another chapter and continue the story! ^.^ If you do please send it to me. My email is |
 Tom the Riddle 2009-01-13 . chapter 1Oh Lordy. Three words:
I LOVE YOU. XD
I just watched Meet the Robinson's for the first time the other day, and Wilbur was instantly my favorite character. This is one of the most sick, perverted, fascinating, and awesome stories I have ever read.
And now I'm Wilbur/Wilbur forever! :) |
 DarkBloodyLegs 2008-12-09 . chapter 3 clever plot idea; It sounds just like Wilbur. And I would never havw thought of that whole go back in time and seduce yourself kinda thing. :) |
 oneironaut 2008-10-11 . chapter 3you win. |
 MTRCestSlash 2008-08-14 . chapter 2In the words of Hal Sparks when he was on Robot Chicken:
"It's not gay! It's masturbation!"
And THIS fic, my friend, is living proof of that statement. ~_~ LoL
Technically, it's not the 'cest-slash I'm collecting in my C2, but it's close enough -- And very awkward and hilarious to have read...LoL |
 yippiee 2008-07-25 . chapter 1that is probably the best... masturbation? fic I have ever read. (yes, masturbation IS a genre.) |
 BlackRose629 2008-06-14 . chapter 3Awesome! you should write more for this pairing^^ i truely loved it^^ i'm so drawing fanart for this^^ |
 sailormulti01 2008-05-30 . chapter 2LOL!! Just... LOL!! I was grinning the whole time I was reading the father/son talk. Hahahahahh!! |
 sailormulti01 2008-05-30 . chapter 1Oh God... OwO
Definitely the effing best idea ever. You my friend have converted me into a Wilbur/Wilbur shipper. Hahahha!! |
 sicca 2008-05-24 . chapter 3Remember me? xD I can't believe I forgot to put you on my Author Alert list. ><
Anyway, It's awesome how you can pull a perfectly believable college!Wilbur. It's like he was mean to be that way. Like always, the interaction between wilbur and wilbur make me giddy.
"...then Carl would have to admit that he doesn't really mean it and they'd be forced to have one of those awful sappy Hallmark, BFF momets with a high probability of using the L word ans just...god, no." Love this part! =P
I feel sorry for poor freshman Wilbur, being molested by his persistent younger self. Tsk Tsk.
M...smut... e-mail it to me, plz? xD |
 Kabbage Kat 2008-05-04 . chapter 1...
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That was possibly the most disturbing thing I have ever read
And yet...
It was so insanely good...
I'm scared right now, because that plot was just plain ol' messed up, but I still continued to read it, and I ended up enjoying it
If I restate:
I am scared
You did very, very well
And you deserve claps for writing this
*claps* |
 Olynara Sedai 2008-03-26 . chapter 3Y'know, you're lucky you're such a good writer, it takes a delicate balance to keep this seductive, interesting, and not THE MOST HORRIFYING THING EVER TO GRACE THE INTERNET'S SMUTTY HALLS. Okay, maybe a little melodramatic, but bare with me :D
That was unsettlingly good. Not just managing to come up with the concept without your brain melting out your ears, but the vocabulary you used to write it. It does sound very Wilbur, the clear language with the occasional 'awesome' thrown in to keep the age right, and the setting itself -especially this chapter- is incredibally realistic. Having a shrink would make perfect sense (though I envy the guy who got to deal with it), and after finding... yourself... that interesting, having someone else your own gender would be logical.
I'm assuming I'm telling you what you already know, sorry :)
Anyway, I adored the second bit, because I'm one of those incredibally lucky teenagers who never got the talk, but I can imagine feeling exactly like Wilbur did. No matter the context, no matter the generation, it doesn't get worse than The Talk. And for a second there, that Wilbur doesn't realise what's about to happen. (And mentioning his dad's empathy, the spark of hope, really added a realistic touch)
As much as I'd like to say something critic-like, I just can't find anything! I enjoyed this too much, it's too well written, and I'm too damn nice to find anything to complain about. Also, in about two minutes I'll email you for those two chapters you didn't post, fully confidant that I can't be judged by the person who wrote it. *grin*
All my love, yours till the sun sets the world on fire, Olynara Sedai |
 theprozacfairy 2008-03-24 . chapter 1Normally, I read an entire fic before reviewing- but this is a special case.
So very painful to read. Especially when they/he get/s caught. And yet, strangely addictive. It took me four attempts to read the whole thing- but I just had to. Good work. I'm going to have to gouge out my mind's eye, right now. |
 Dark Lemonadifier 2008-03-20 . chapter 2That was very much amazing. |D Excellent writing. |