Beautiful, simply precious and beautifully written. I believe so strongly in every word you have written in this story. It's all so very true. We have a tendency to write long and involved stories, of hate, lust, deceit, love, mystery, sex, sex.

But it's the simple thoughts we express for special people, that truely come from our hearts that show our true talent and love of the craft of writing. Sherabo

Very sad but good story. I loved it.

Aww..that's so sad.. Keep it up on your stories!

aw poor seto...love this sort story. Hope there's some more joey x seto stories coming soon!