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helen the 2nd
2008-10-08
ch 7, anon.
abuseVery good story so far... but could you please finish it or add another chapter. You write very well it's good to know that you're staying. Stress from school is quite understandable and annoying. Over all review very good story, but is it just me or is Ryou being mean to his Bakura and Bakura's being nicer. Both very unusual. But the thing with the knivies very, very nice and very Bakura like. Something tells me Moody would like him because he's very prepared.

Bye bye
Wild Dragon's breath
2008-08-01
ch 7,
abuseHm. I'm glad you have less stress now. Did you use the profanity filter? I would, but I don't really care either way since I don't get any profanity in my reviews, dunno why...Maybe I should write a terrible story, just to see what a flame is...I'm rather curious...
I'm kinda out of it at the moment, but this chapter seemed pretty good, nothing wrong that I could spot...Does this mean you'll be developing the plot now?
Silver and Gold Make Bronze
2008-07-08
ch 7,
abuseYou have got to finish this. Thanks so much for updating!
t recorder
2008-07-03
ch 7,
abusei am glad you decided to stay and i must say i do respect your considuration on the cussing thing for i to come from a house of no foul toungs. so keep up the good work
Knight25
2008-07-02
ch 7,
abuseGreat chapter.
Kelekiah Galadrian
2008-07-02
ch 7,
abuseYou're welcome for reviewing. I'm glad you decided to stay! Let's see... I think Harry and co. are stupid for not believing Yugi's group. I enjoyed the chapter a whole lot. I think Umbridge should die. Stupid worthless retarded... *goes off into a rant* Interesting chapter though. Kool! Great job!! I can't wait for your next chapter! Good luck with future chapters!!
Kaeleer's Heart
2008-07-02
ch 7,
abuseThis was a good chapter, Glad ya updated! And don't worry about the swearing, people do it all the time.
t recorder
2008-06-13
ch 6,
abusethis is really good. update soon. this is one of my favorite crossovers update...
Wild Dragon's breath
2008-05-21
ch 6,
abuseI quite understand the dislike of cursing, so it's understandable to stop.
Knight25
2008-05-15
ch 6,
abusePlease don't go! All you need to do is change your login password and your siblings won't beable to use your account.

Please keep going! Your the only one that iv'e seen that had Yugi and co. reveal thier secrets early. I like it!

Please continue!
Mei1105
2008-05-15
ch 6,
abuseIf you're tired of all the cursing why not just go back and edit the chapters with it in. I can't imagine it would take too long.

If you do decide to move your stories though, I have a few websites I can reccommend, though none of them are as good as this one. *worships*

Either way - I was a little surprised to see that they spilt the beans to everyone so quickly, but then again, this could make for some interesting events! Plus it'll give Harry, Ron and Hermione a lot of oppertunities to go "wait, which Yugi/Ryou is that?!"

Anyway, good job! Be sure to let us know what you decide.
Darth Reaper
2008-05-14
ch 6,
abuseIt is always nice to know that Bakura is a snake person and someone who collects knives as a hobby.
Kelekiah Galadrian
2008-05-14
ch 6,
abuseI for one think this chapter was very well written and so is this story. It's true I've probably read better, and that doesn't mean I'm talking about my own story, but yours is good too. However, I do understand the cursing thing. I also come from a non-cursing family and I totally understand where you're coming from. I don't want you to leave, but if you do, I can understand. I'll miss you bunches 'cause your story is great and you've been a sweet person to me. Thanks for that. If you do decide to leave, I thank you for your kind words and I wish you luck!! Great job on this chapter by the way, I enjoyed it immensely!!
Kaeleer's Heart
2008-05-14
ch 5,
abuseYou know what? I'm just going to ignore what you just said, you idiot. Flames do not hurt me, because it really doesn't matter. I used to write just as bad as a Sue Author, and I learned my lesson for doing that. So don't go telling me that "I'M" the trash writer. And your a sophmore in high school? I'm a senior, and that's really sad how your acting.
Wild Dragon's breath
2008-05-08
ch 5,
abuseThe wand scene was interesting, but the bit with Yami looking eager at whatever Bakura was gonna do was a bit out of character.
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