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| Laocoons 2008-05-31 ch 6,  | abuseI love you for writing this. I've been wanting to read this story (well, y'know, a story with the premise of explaining Grizabella) for ages now. I like that all the names you come up with are believable for a Jellicle, and I like how you describe the interactions between Storm and Grizabella. Griddlebone turning down the coming of age dance was a nice surprise as well. Don't leave me hanging! Please! |
| Eliaza 2008-01-08 ch 5, | abuseOoh love it love it love it! Keep it up!! :D |
| Eliaza 2008-01-06 ch 4, | abuseYaay finally an update!! :D Still as awesome as ever, keep it up! |
| Stratagem 2007-12-07 ch 3, | abuseAw, I love the budding relationship between Jelly and Carbucketty. Hmm, this is an interesting story about how Grizabella got to where she is. I'm curious as to how she fell so far from beauty of the tribe to...what she became. I think this is going to be a great story, and I can't wait for the update! |
| SpiritFanNumber1 2007-11-28 ch 3, | abuseoh no! a cliffy! i really enjoyed this chapter, like all the others! they all have a style, and emit creativity every word! i love it! |
| Eliaza 2007-11-28 ch 3, | abuseOh I love it!! Jelly and Carbucketty? Soo cute! Update soon!! |
| Mandy of the Amoeba 2007-11-20 ch 2, | abuseI'm really enjoying your writing style - looking forward to more of this!! |
| SpiritFanNumber1 2007-11-18 ch 2, | abuseoh! the suspense! and i love the foreshadowing! ^.^ |
| Eliaza 2007-11-16 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter! Can't wait to see what happens with Bella. |
| potternutter 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseFor a first chapter of a story, that is excellent. It introduces the reader to the place and the characters, but takes it at a steady pace. I like that about a story. Well done. |
| Eliaza 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseOh very good so far! Update soon! :) |
| SpiritFanNumber1 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseWow! I'm in suspence! I love your writing style! (And the dry humor XD) |