great story. includes zetsu-kun! yay! but, you said it has sakura in it, but its complete?

Aw, this was great! Well-written, clear plot, great descriptions, funny yet sad, it's everything! I love it! XD You've inspired me to write my own PeinZet story. I'd also like a sequel for when Zetsu joins Akatsuki, but you don't have to. This ending ties it all up very nicely. LOVED IT!
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i love this to death x//DD

THE ENDING IS SO LOL!XD

damn it it's a one shot. I love the writing!

This is a good fic! It explains things, and goes at an even pace! im faving XD

awsome story i wish you would write more to it!

I love the black sides commentary, it's just hillarious. Love this story, it was funny and wasn't rushed.

That was really sweet. lol Loved the ending.

Pein is only acting fatherly like, right?
Why is Sakura in there if it is a PeinxZetsu fic?
Because even if shes in they is she that important that you had to change the name?

I really enjoyed this story a lot it's cute and touching.
So, wanted to drop a review for it. Very nice Keri t3h Ninja, very nice.

lol i love the song sakura kiss and i like this weird, but sweet, pairing!

that was the end?! wow you know when to end don't you? XD

PeinXZetsu? wow i never really thought about that pairing...sounds good tho! XD

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Oh! I love it! Great fic! And very well written, and then ending made me laugh XD