Really enjoyed this story. I felt you kept all the characters very true to themselves and their nature. The part with them together is very intense and ... well ... hot. Quite enjoyable indeed all around.

THANK YOU!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING THIS FANFICTION STORY. IT WAS FUCCIN AWSOME!

and humorous! i just cant get over the part where he's like..

"Shit...shit shit shit!"

lol its just funneh!

plus i love oneill and carter as a couple! there so cute! i love jonathon/jack oneill! he makes meh heart sore. :)

and its oneill...with two l's. theres a oneill with just one and he really has nothing to do with this..lol

um anyways!

YOUR AWSOME! I LOVE YOU! THANK YOU!

your fan

aenon ;d

truly disappointed by the ending. am hoping that you'll write a sequel or more parts where they figure things out and get together (within weeks of the incident and not years later)