Sweet and funny. The first and last lines are especially good. The first captures that note of astonishment and nervousness really well with the italicised 'all', and made me smile :) Short, yet all the better for it. I like it

I really enjoyed reading Galadriel where she's not the know it all. It's nice someone has written her as a young, nervous girl and when she first meets her half-cousins. I'm curious also on the Aredhel/Celegorm romance. I really liked how you made the first Celegorm the first one to speak to her. It's destiny in a way because Celegorm with his brother had kicked her brother out of Nargothrond centuries later. This was a real treat and thanks for writing!