Lol! you made me laugh my but off in that last chapter! haha...

Wow. Love the whole story. the idea is awesome, the outtakes are hilarious! The story is well written and I really can't wait to read another chapter:)

Please update this, its so amazing and it would be sad if the story doesn't grow:

These are some high quality outtakes for some high quality fanfictions.

You have L's personality down perfectly. It's amazing, and the writing is captivating. Death Note with a little sprinkling of Kingdom Hearts, enough to keep the reader awaiting the appearance of the next "hallucination".

Also, "Yes. My name is L." is so genius it's scary.

I looked forward to the next update!

Oh, L's scared! Love the story. Update soon!

Hahaha, really funny! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Macerena! lol

I bet L has diabetes. His life span is shortened by that.

-.- Try all you want L, they're going to keep following you.

Other than that, this fic is pure WIN. I absolutely love this idea and the way you're going about it. Not just replacing character roles, but actually incorporating both plotlines into one story is really cool. Update soon, por favor!

Bo: Poor L getting creeped out though he will never admit it by those darn shadows (heartless)

Ski: heehee. Update soon please!

great chapter...but I'm somewhat confused...sorry if I'm waisting your time asking but...what is going on?

I would also change hotels if I saw something like that too...I've never read a Kingdom Hearts/Death Note cross over...so please update soon

First of all, I have to say that I love how you woke L up. xD It took me a second to see what you did there, but I loved it!

Your writing is really high quality still, I think everything fit together nicely. :D

Sometimes it seems to move a bit fast, but that's nothing really important. I'm pretty much completely hooked on this story right now, so update it soon you silly girl!

No complaints here. It's just my personal pet peeve of these "- - - - -". Perhaps my next review will be more in depth, but you see I have to go wash the dye out of my hair.

You're really good.

Yay, I'm reviewing. I never do that.

Please continue this story, it's pretty sweet so far. :3 It's always good when detectives turn into key-wielding swordsmen. Seriously, I love the concept of this.