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Elliesmeow
2008-07-16
ch 37,
abuseYeah, after you drew attention to the quote I wondered at her using it at all. So is it something that you will explain or are you just teasing?

-Ellie
FULLMETAL
2008-07-16
ch 37, anon.
abuseGood chapter! Roslin sure knows how to keep her cool. If I found out that the individual responsible for the destruction of civilization was in my custody I don't know what I would have done! I wonder what other juicy secrets Caprica Six is hiding? Also, does Roslin know she's quoting an earth author? Until next time!
gatelover
2008-07-16
ch 37,
abuseI am glad to hear that the story will be longer. It's a great story. Very interesting chapter. Loved how you showed the stress that Lee endured after talking to the Cylon. And as far as Kara and Lee sweating in this story both kind they do such a great job with it though. Update soon Great work
darth rat
2008-07-16
ch 37,
abuseGreat chapter!
s
2008-07-15
ch 37, anon.
abuseI'm fine without a lot of smut, just enjoying the story! Could definitely feel Lee's frustration.. keep it up!
Elliesmeow
2008-07-09
ch 36,
abuseI really, really enjoyed hearing Six's perspective on where things went wrong and why they took the actions that they did.

Great chapter.

-Ellie
FULLMETAL
2008-07-09
ch 36, anon.
abuseI'm sorry to hear that you're not feeling well! Get well soon!
That said, I'm a bit disappointed at the brevity of this chapter. Caprica's musings on what it means to be a Cylon and God were very interesting, I'll give you credit for that, but it could have been longer. Anyway, I'll stop whining now. Until next time!

PS: For future reference, after a long time between updates never apologize to your readers for the wait, or try to explain why you didn't update. After 3 years of reading fanfiction, it's been my experience (and many other's, I'm sure) that those are the signs of a story that's on the way to being abandoned, which makes readers loose interest... Just update! OR Better yet, make it up to your readers with an extra long chapter :)
darth rat
2008-07-09
ch 36,
abuseGreat chapter. Keep it up!
gatelover
2008-07-09
ch 36,
abuseInteresting chapter. Caprica gave Lee lots to think about. I wonder how the Old Man, Roslin and Kara will react to finding out that their prisoner is single handedly responsible for the death of the human race.

P.S. If Jamie Bamber was going to be pampering me, I would make sure that I was bedridden. It would be so worth it.
time16
2008-07-07
ch 35,
abuseI just read the last chapter. And I´m glad that Kara opend up to Lee. But I hope we will see soon there still open TALK and mybe a little baby Thrace-Adama. Please update soon.
gatelover
2008-06-23
ch 35,
abuseWelcome Back! Good warm up to your next installment. It is good to see Kara not being closed off to Lee and sharing her fears with him. Can't wait till they have the religion talk and the baby talk. Update soon. Great work
Gavril Peloponnakos
2008-06-22
ch 16,
abusegood story, considering how I hate romance stories.
I was able to read 16 chapters of it though.
I am more akin to the action based stories, so I'm not going to read further, but other than that; I really like yours.
Good job on the character development and solid writing.
FULLMETAL
2008-06-22
ch 35, anon.
abuseWelcome back! It's been a while.

I definitely see what you mean when you call this chapter a warm up. Personally, I was hoping for that discussion they've been putting off, about Lee's theological ideas. I guess that'll have to wait. Not much else I can say about this chapter.

Until next time!

PS: What did you think of the midseason finale of BSG? How strange was that?! I can't even begin to guess how the show will end now. I'm curious to see how it will affect this story.
darth rat
2008-06-22
ch 35,
abuseNice. Update soon!
winjan
2008-06-21
ch 34,
abuseA little confused here, I thought Kara and Lee were in the same raptor. If so, how can Kara fly another raptor which transport the prisoner
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