Wow! This is AWESOME! Must. Have. More! xD

My attention is caught, you opened up a story in a brilliant beginning (please say you'll continue this story!) Great job!

Well, I'm always happy to see a new addition to this forgotten corner. :)

Your story has started out nice, I'm interested to see where it goes. However, there were a couple of grammatical and punctuation errors that kept distracting me. Betas work wonders at helping you with those kinds of things. :)

As much as I would love a story that focused only on Darkness, it will be interesting to see what you do with this character. I will be anxiously awaiting.