argh. suspense is kill me! nice chapter.

Aw! I hate tension between the best couple around! But it was very good ^__^

Woo! Omg, Edward, what's wrong? I don't really like him like that, he sounds ... not Edward-y. Really can't wait to read more!!

UPDATE SOON!!

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I didn't like the epilogue- he's not allowed to leave her again.

I liked this chapter, though. I wonder what Alice saw. Keep up the good work!

its good so far
some of bella's lines seem very forward...especially in the epilogue...and wouldn't she be a little more bothered by the fact that neither alice or edward will tell her what alice saw?
careful to keep them in character!
keep it going! ur doing a good job!

So sad! It was almost exactly like the first time he left her!! So evil!! This is the first Twilight fic I've R&Red, WOO! My mate's been giving me loads of books to read and she finally gave me the series that I have now finished! WOO! Anyway, I liked it. I don't actually mind either ship, but I prefer ExB. Can't wait to read more!!

UPDATE SOON!!

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