I like the interaction between the characters. Plus great reference to Due South.

Sweet! Very very sweet! Ugh, I miss the show so much! At least we still have the books, right?

Aww, that was sweet. Poor Murph. Very much enjoyed the image of them dancing. *sigh*

Aw...that's so sweet. Everything was totally in character too. I can picture Murphy as being completely uncomfortable in that sort of thing. I loved Harry's dialogue too. The line about the zombies? Priceless. Keep up the fantastic work!

Well, that qualifies for a simply adorable. Bravo.
Fire & Napalm

"Stop staring at my legs."
*snicker*
good story! :-)

Aw! That was extremely cute and very funny- you write Murphy and Dresden perfectly! It's really nice to find a story that could be romantic or friendship depending on how you look at it- very canon :D

I liked it. It really sounded like something that would be in one of the books, despite Murph not being the type that would own a pair of strappy red sandals.

Cute.

This was very good. I like the banter between them and I especially like that they sound like good friends, which is how I always see them. This would have been a lovely scene in the series...and I bet Paul Blackthorne can dance. Stoopid Sci Fi Channel! Thanks for carrying on the fantasy here.

So adorable!! I loved it! ^^

Nice characterisation again, a pleasure to read.
One small quibble, when dancing close in, its pretty much impossible to stare at the girls legs. Unless I'm kind of thick, and that was meant as a Murphy "moan for the sake of it"?