awesome.

These are just precious. I favor parts 2 and 4.

I really liked this - all of the sections worked really well and you captured the ageing and changing well. Good job :-)

Hey, I got here through Ruuger's page. I just wanted to stop in and say how much I liked this. It's kind of rare to see Dawn get a fair treatment in fan fiction, and it's nice to see things from her point of view. Plus, seeing her interract with Merrick and Giles was an extra treat.

This is great! I love the way you build up Dawn's relationship with Buffy and Giles and you managed to pack so much plot into these short pieces. Bravo!

A really nice exploration of Buffy and Dawn's relationship with many nice touches throughout, such as Dawn bonding with Merrick and Buffy saving Dawn even before being the Slayer.

i liked the story it was really good. one thing though it was a little hard 2 tell how old dawn was. so clearer year breaks would have been nice. but other than that i like it

Awesome. That was really fun.