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| daflippnay 2008-07-28 ch 3, | abuseVery, very beautiful! |
| 7 League Boots 2007-11-14 ch 3, | abuseSweet! From angst to squee-ee! Really loved the imagery of their flying high together, like a team but more than that. Good capture of their emotions in cautious release and finally freed to express to each other. I like the period this takes place, too; lots of possibilities and this works so well. Great story, and great read, thanks. |
| Chopin Gal 2007-11-14 ch 3, | abuseThis was short and sweet and very well done. I picture Jack and Sam getting together post-S8 too. You painted a nice picture of what may have happened. Thanks for a good story! |
| Dreaming of Jack 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuse...sigh...ah...feeling all warm and happy here... |
| Thara June 2007-11-14 ch 3, | abuseTHX I'd really like to read a sequel ... And I loved the way you described them flying through the air ... God bless you! Shalom |
| kinnik72 2007-11-13 ch 3, | abuseI am so happy I could cry! Alright, Bren!! |
| kinnik72 2007-11-13 ch 2, | abuseOh, the pain, angst and yet so sweet, someday. |
| kinnik72 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. |
| ????? 2007-11-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseAww. that was cute. |
| BettyHall223 2007-11-13 ch 3, | abuseVery nice. It was good to see Jack open up to Sam and tell her how he felt about her in the last chapter. |
| dp 2007-11-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice. |
| Bekki 2007-11-13 ch 3, | abuseHi! This chapter was great too. I loved the ‘I love you’ doesn’t begin to cover it,” Very Jack and very non-cliched! Woohoo! |
| Bekki 2007-11-13 ch 2, | abuseSque! That was great! Thanks for sharing! |
| Josephine Martin 2007-11-13 ch 3, | abuseLovely. A fitting addition to the official version, and very believable. Thank you! |
| gater62 2007-11-13 ch 3, | abuseSque! Loved it! Great tailgate conversation! |