 Lutherian 2009-04-05 . chapter 3That was fantastic. |
 daflippnay 2008-07-28 . chapter 3Very, very beautiful! |
 7 League Boots 2007-11-14 . chapter 3Sweet! From angst to squee-ee! Really loved the imagery of their flying high together, like a team but more than that. Good capture of their emotions in cautious release and finally freed to express to each other. I like the period this takes place, too; lots of possibilities and this works so well. Great story, and great read, thanks. |
 Chopin Gal 2007-11-14 . chapter 3This was short and sweet and very well done. I picture Jack and Sam getting together post-S8 too. You painted a nice picture of what may have happened. Thanks for a good story! |
 Dreaming of Jack 2007-11-14 . chapter 1...sigh...ah...feeling all warm and happy here... |
 Thara June 2007-11-14 . chapter 3THX
I'd really like to read a sequel ...
And I loved the way you described them flying through the air ...
God bless you!
Shalom |
 kinnik72 2007-11-13 . chapter 3I am so happy I could cry! Alright, Bren!! |
 kinnik72 2007-11-13 . chapter 2Oh, the pain, angst and yet so sweet, someday. |
 kinnik72 2007-11-13 . chapter 1Very nice. |
 ????? 2007-11-13 . chapter 3 Aww. that was cute. |
 BettyHall223 2007-11-13 . chapter 3Very nice. It was good to see Jack open up to Sam and tell her how he felt about her in the last chapter. |
 dp 2007-11-13 . chapter 1 Very nice. |
 Bekki 2007-11-13 . chapter 3Hi!
This chapter was great too. I loved the ‘I love you’ doesn’t begin to cover it,” Very Jack and very non-cliched!
Woohoo! |
 Bekki 2007-11-13 . chapter 2Sque! That was great! Thanks for sharing! |
 Josephine Martin 2007-11-13 . chapter 3Lovely. A fitting addition to the official version, and very believable. Thank you! |