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| Sakura123 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseWhat a nice laid back story; I've never played any form of Poker, but the Storm sibbling's competition was nicely illustrated. Aside from some minor errors (names and spelling, mildly), this was very entertaining (I say again). Nice Job. Sakura123 |
| crystal cerberus 2008-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was funny |
| MaxAlec4ever 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abusewow, that was the best F4 one-shot i ever read ! |
| LuffysAngel 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! ^_^ |
| Kari Kaiba-Wheeler 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAwesome oneshot. ^__^ I love it, it made me laugh. I didn't know that Susan's full name was Susannah... or whatever it was. Johnny had the best hand, right? and he gave it up b/c it was her b-day? That was sweet and if not.. well, I guess Johnny isn't a tough guy. ^-^; |
| fangrl 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! write another short soon. mabey a reed/sue. Please. if bribing works then let me tell that i am adding this to fave storys and u are on my fave author and author alert list now. PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER SOON ^_^ ^_^ ^_^ |