I'll keep reading this in the future interessting
(I have a fanfic with some similarities in the plots)
So far this story is promissing and I like your writing style ;] )
I'll keep reading and you keep updating kay? ;P

Why haven't you updated yet? D:
You have to! Or I will seriously die! ;~;

Anyway, this is a very good story, I like your unique way of description, as well as your style for writing. Very interesting! ^^;

This is probably one of my Top 3 favorite stories on Fanfiction. ^o^

Please update soon! 8D

~XxCrimsonXXAngelxX AKA Kaylyn

This is pretty good story, since there are totally not enough about Light! LOL, well i plan to write my own as well.

I liked your unique way of description, and your style for writing, but just one thing on repeatativeness. I probably do this too, but at the start of your paragraphs (especially in Chapter 1) you tend to start with 'Naeko'. Also, maybe you could give her some characterisation with her thoughts other than plainly 'telling' us about her.

But interesting story!

Hope you'll read mine when it's out! ^.^

how come u haventy updated yeT
U HAVE TO OR I WILL DIE

omk, this story is epic!
i can't wait for more! and the whole tripping on her shawl sounds like something i would do.

Wow... It just keeps getting intiresting! Good work takes time, so take as long as you want, as long as you update at some point. Great work!

-Sin

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

yay an update :D update soon

yeeha! L is back! yey!

nice update! :D

cool please update soon thanks.

Did Naeko really trip and give herself a concussion? LOL sounds like something I would do. And you're really killing me with the sneak peek... that's not fair!

The end is soon...? NO...>< Well know that I know it's near the end it makes me ever more anxious for the next chapter...x)

aww.. that's so sad.. i wonder what'll happen once light is gone.. =) more drama i suppose..

anyway.. hope you'll update soon! :D

Happy early b~day! I just started the story, update soon!

Humm... Intiresting...

Happy Birthday! (A bit early though...)

Can't wait for your next update...

-Sin