*continues loving*

I wonder what Raistlin's thoughts will be when he realizes that it's Dalamar who's the apprentice...That ought to be fun!

*sadistic laugh*

It's kinda ironic really...Or I think it is. But I've a rather strange view on what's ironic and what's not, or so I've been told.

Please, do continue! Soon is best.

Great job (as usual). I can't wait to see what happens when Raistlin realizes who his apprentice is.

sorry i didn't get a chance to review the last chapter, but i LOVE this one. it's absolutely great. poor Dalamar, though.

i loved Dalamar when he said "Shalafi" ;-)

I really love the description of the Tower. Keep up the good work. Update soon!

It's been forever since I last had a chance to read your stories; ah, well, ** happens. I've just spent several hours reading everything since chapter 10 of Nocturnale. Your work is so, so impressive. I love the contrasting cold/heat imagery here, especially the cold books versus the fire. Wow! That's just awesome. And overall, this is an interesting approach to the Legends trilogy. I'm looking forward to seeing how Fistandantilus and Dalamar interact.

wow, your stories are really good! I really like your portrayals of Raistlin and Dalamar. very strong characters!! I wonder what sort of twists you'll take the tale through next. :)

I practically jumped up and down with excitement when I got the update alert. The alerts for your story and the chapters themselves never fail to brighten up my day. And I agree with you about Tracy Hickman. I really dislike homophobia, but I won't get started on my rant.

~WalkingInDarkness737~

this is the best fanfiction i have ever read! i hope that fith chapter will be soon! =D

*squeals happily*
You updated! Yay!
Ahem.

Great chapter, as always. Loving Dalamar's cynicism. You're capturing him very well. I'm amazed at how well you've 'nailed down' (that is the phrase, yes?) Par-Salian, Justarius and Ladonna, considering how little we see of them in the books...

You better update soon, or else...*waves spellbook menacingly*

Wonderfull chapter. I could feel the emotion in this. Gives Dalamar a hug (cause he really needs it) and somehow manages to give Raistlin one too. I shall be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.^_^

The long wait is as worth it as ever. Congratulations on a wonderful chapter! I can't wait until the next one.
I really like how you portray Raistlin and Dalamar in their relationship. It's realistic and entrancing, and it really makes one wonder how Margaret Weis didn't think of it herself. I also really like the way you write, it has a very mature professional feel to it. Keep up the great work I'll wait forever if I have to until the entire series is finally complete!

~WalkingInDarkness737~

Argh cliffhanger. *splats at the bottom* I love you and hate you and just want more! *cries*

Nice to see Dalamar finally has his answers, no matter how awful the truth is. I'm eagerly awaiting to see what you write next!

so sorry i haven't reviewed in forever. . . .but by Nuitari! you are pure evil! that is the single worst cliff hanger i have ever read in my entire life! not cool! you must update soon! this is one of the best chapters so far!

i also love the way you managed to get the five holes in Dalamar's chest, in there. i wasn't sure how you were going to do that but it turned out really well. please update soon!!

excellent story - can't wait for an update - I have read all of your Dragonlance stories and love the Dalamar/Raistlin story lines. Thanks