i'm back! :)

you were able to get down the kind of pyschological impact reno's job had inflicted on him amazingly well. it filled us readers in on another, albeit unexpected, aspect of his character - made him more human. also, it brings elena closer to why reno was so reluctant for her to join. which raises the question, how will she tell him she knows that beneath his exterior, he's not as carefree as he makes himself? more importantly, if elena sees her action as an instant trust-breaker, how will RENO see it?

one last thing. as isolation being a symptom reno exhibited, he was quick to invite elena to stay with him. isn't that a good sign? maybe she could assist in healing his mental wounds, or cope... or am i reading too much into it?

anyway. as always, another great chapter and update as soon as you're able, please. :D

"In my mind, I see a fawn caught in the headlights of an approaching car" [[Elena and Reno having a moment, but getting caught by Tseng - Comment - Not a pretty picture. Evil deer.]]

" “Perhaps this can wait until you’re presentable.” [[Reminder: Tseng to Elena about her apperance - Comment - She just has the gown on right? I don't remember how she is sitting, can they see her butt? XD]]

"I’m wearing a freakin’ ShinRa bra and panties. The name is sewn into the label. Is that really necessary? Maybe it’s bulletproof." [[No reminder here, but LMAO XD Bullet proof panties]]

"I feel like a ghost… or a ninja……Or a ghost ninja! [[Elena walking around the headquaters - Comment - As if ninjas could get any scarier, and now you are suggesting there could be ghost ninjas!? *Hides under the covers*]]

I want to work for ShinRa.

"“Laney’s got a gun,” Reno sings out, paying tribute to a song from decades ago by using my name. “Laney’s got a gun!” He grins, eying me as he strides down the hallway" [[O.M.G XD I laughd so loud I had to sing it. I had to listen to this aerosmith song almost every day my senior year in high school. This was the only casset Shawn had]]

"…I really don’t want to be alone tonight." [[Elena talking about going back to Reno's apparent - Comment - You don't have to be alone tonight Elena, I am free ;P]]

"“I don’t feel a thing.” [[Reminder: Reno responding to Elena's attack on the fact he doesn't care and to give up the act. - Comment: Aw she hurt his feelings :( ]]

"Ugh. There I go again… finding reasons to dismiss well-intended actions." [[Reminder, Elena thinking while Reno sits there and watches her - Comment Yeah! Can't you just see that Reno wuvs you :( Why do you have to push him away? ;;]]

"“Then why can’t I trust you?” Talk about pulling a 180°. Now -I’m- suddenly the one on the offensive? How do we end up in these situations anyway?" [[Reno and Elena talking to each other about trust, and being on the same side. Comment - Omg. This is actually scary to read sometimes XD like the two mind games that are going on at the same time, then I think, Carrie wrote this XD She has the ablity to play mind games against her mind games. lol]]

"His eyes were wide, almost deranged as he gestured at the door behind him. “I don’t think you know what you’re getting yourself into.”" [[Reminder: Reno explaining why he is a BA, and Elenea is an infant - Comment - Seriously big Anime moment, I pictured it at a wild camera angle.]]

"“Laney, there’s nothing I’d love more than for you to be under me.”" [[Reminder: Comedy moment! Reno makes a perverted joke about Elena wanting to be under him - Comment - I laughed XD I knew it! I knew it was coming! Now there is the Reno we all miss and love]]

"Then… could he be fighting for my life?
No. He has a prominent position in the company" [[Reminder: Elena is fighting within her self as she waits for Reno in a room - Now my comment, I love the back and forth she is having in her mind, it makes me the reader conflicted on what Reno will really do]]

"He looks like a wild stray that’s been chained for the first time." [[Reminder: Reno seeing Elena for the first time after almost excucuting her. She is refering to him holding restraint - I love the mental images you paint]]

"I’ve been caught, kidnapped, shot at, interrogated, almost executed, and examined… that’s the only word of explanation I get?!" [[All he said was hey, but my first thought was, it could be worse Elena XD I had a sigh of relief. At least he wasn't like "Time to die"]]

I love the obstucle course XD I felt panic when reading that, like I had to read it faster to have her go faster through it.

Hey, just thought I'd say how much I'm loving where this story is going! I lost track of it for a while, but I'm really glad that I found it and caught back up with it. I'm looking forward to where this goes next!

And so Reno and Elena continued their happy assignating lives together...but... I WANT MORE!
lols yeah Little Wildthing told me that this story rocked and so I read it but I disagree...
It AWESOMELY EPICLY ROCKED!
=3
Gd job UPDATE SOON and yeah write more!

WHOA! BRAVO! MADE IT!!
and I have school in two hours whoa better get to sleep then! lols.
It's been a pleasure reading this story (wah? this sounds like its the end) no!
What if there's a massive twist since the device thingy was wireless it could have found Reno's house and OMG SCORN COULD BE THERE WAITING FOR THEM AND THEY COULD TORTURE RENO AND ELENA AND OMG WRITE MORE!
Seriously it could go on forever :P
Luv it
Luved you
Little Wildthing signing off.
Stay safe, well, organised and UPDATE SON!
=3
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O.o
NO RENO!
:P

aw
girlish squeel again
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DAMMIT THESE CLIFF HANGERS ARE KILLING
btw I have a slow computer
DAMMIT :P

OMG!
THis'll be a quick review to get onto the next chapter but good JOB
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Your too good at this
I was squeeling at the end of this chapter
which isn't a good thing when its 12 20 in the morning =3
lols but aww that was so cute!
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o.O whoa
that
was
electrifying and I cant spell DX
lols XD
YAY RENO he's awesome
good description the right amount.

LOLS! sorry ya gonna get alot of emails of me reviewing cause THIS IS AWESOME =3
Gumen heheh o well it boost ya numbers anyway. Lols ahh this is awesome man
I like the way Reno's attitude tis funny. And meh I can see DeCosta fitting Elena :P
I'll try to review every chapter but I might hehehe
lols
LWx

HI!
just wanted to say a GOOD START SO FAR!
I've only just got into Relena and was deeply disapionted with the few number of video's on youtube :@ so yeah I found ReiAyanami32's video which was sweet and then in her notes she said to read your story so here I am now :P
Anyway Interesting to see what'll happen.
See you at the end =3
Little Wildthing
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P.S.
Can't wait ^-^