WOOP WOOP! Go Temari! Tell that lazy ninja who's boss! LOL

~ KASI

lol...fabulous.

That was a cool fic.
I liked it when Temari used her fan to blow away the clouds, it was funny.
I hope that you will have a good day!

HA!

An excellent humorous little one-shot. I think you did a good job capturing what a relationship between Shikamaru and Temari might be like...particularly on Shikamaru's end. You nailed very well what I imagine his thought processes and "I'm bored and would be irritated if it took less effort" dialogue might be like.

Hm. I think perhaps the only complaint I can think of is that Temari would add a little more threat to her elegantly pointed cloud removal, somehow. Perhaps let some menace be shown, because I doubt she wouldn't be feeling irked that Shikamaru was so totally ignoring her. Or, at least, maybe pointing out why she didn't.

Spelling and grammar are top-notch, and thanks for writing it:)

Oh my gosh, that is so evil...and cool - who knew Temari was that powerful?! Short but simple and sweet - I liked it. They were both in character, Shika more so than Temari I think.

Very nice story. Your pleasant choice of words really makes this story flowery. Please read my story

LOL, I love how Temari used her fan at the end. Great story and characterizations!

lol.poor shika-kun.temari ruined his fun.this was good.

Very nice.

Ha! Poor Shikamaru. All he wants is an uncomplicated look at the clouds... but he doesn't know what's good for him ;-).

Wonderful story, as always.