| Reviews for Eternal Fire of a Dying Soul |
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His Lil' Half-Blood Princess 12/28/10 . chapter 8So beautiful... I'm crying! |
DM-sama 9/12/09 . chapter 7Wasn't Lucius already, like, a fifth year by the time Severus came to Hogwarts? I'm even more confuzed... |
DM-sama 9/12/09 . chapter 4Wasn't Severus's mother a witch, and his father a muggle? I'm confuzed... LILxSEV 4EV! |
Phx-Songbird 9/11/09 . chapter 7Lucius won't tell but there's no telling what Bella will do. Can't wait to find out. |
Miss.Cupid 9/9/09 . chapter 6Oh my goodness this is so sad :(. I really like the title though. I like how you delve into Snape's thoughts and why he does what he does. I was just wondering how long this is going to be. Are you planning for it to last till Harry is at Hogwarts or will it end after Lily marries James? I love your writing style. Goodness Treen you need to write more soon :). Don't worry I'll keep you motivated. |
Phx-Songbird 4/19/08 . chapter 6Aw, Sevvie is so cute when he's brave! |
Skippy Agogo 4/18/08 . chapter 4Sev's father was a muggle, the chances of him acting in the way you've written is not credible. Generally speaking people don't abuse their kids in public, that's something that happens in private because the 'parent' doesn't want to be caught beating a little kid by other adults who'd either hurt the fool or have him thrown in jail where the other prisoners would hurt the fool. The story is a bit too sympathic of the man who became Snape, yes his life sucked, but most abused kids don't grow up to be sociopaths. |
Alcott 4/3/08 . chapter 1This is really well done! Thank you for showing me where I could find your fics. You've got a strong talent for writing; keep at it! |
Catmint 3/18/08 . chapter 4This isn't bad as fics go, but there is one major error - Snape's father was a Muggle. If this fic was written before HBP came out, you need to say so. |
Phx-Songbird 3/17/08 . chapter 4Wow! That was amazing... and so sad. *sob* You gave me props. Cool. :) |
Phx-Songbird 2/9/08 . chapter 3Poor Sevvie! He's so sad. Aleast he has a friend, even if it is Malfoy. Good stuff. Keep going. |
1overE 12/21/07 . chapter 2It's so sad... :( |
1overE 12/21/07 . chapter 1Poor Sev. I feel bad for him... he's so cool, and yet, so made fun of. -Biohazard1919 |
Phx-Songbird 12/20/07 . chapter 2Poor little Sevvy. It's so unfair. Oh well that's life. Keep it up this is great. Do we get to see Sevvy and Lily? |
Phx-Songbird 11/16/07 . chapter 1Sorry I didn't coem and review sooner but I've been busy with ch4. This is so good. I can't wait to read the next chapter. |