This is good. I like this.

That was so sad, it almost made me cry. I love the Mummy Movies, and I think this is a very well written songfic. I love the song by the way. Evanescence rocks! :) Good job on this one.

A great story. Very good.

Well, i like the way the song fit the scene, but it would have been nice to see some more of your own writing in between the song words.