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silver-eyed
2008-12-30 . chapter 10
oh, that's so sweet of her and thoughtful too! hopefully her brother becomes her friend! yay for the update as well, it's been awhile. anyway, keep it up! XD
Lord of the Land of Sushi
2008-12-29 . chapter 10
You make Yugito amazing, did you know that?

To be perfectly honest, your characterization of Yugito in this work and (NBM) is absolutely fantastic! Why it has so few reviews, I will never know. Your writing style is good, but it is your plot, and your ideas that are really captivating. Since there's so little canon information on Yugito, it makes her a very flexible character and you seem to be making the most of it. To be honest, I think you should switch from drabbles and outright write a Yugito-centric story. I'm usually more of a Naruto-centric story fan, or at least Naruto-has-a-major-role-in-relation-to-the-main-character fan, but I can really see a multi-chapter Yugito-centric fanfiction popping up.

Great work. Keep updating (and hopefully soon!)
Missy
2008-12-02 . chapter 9
Please,please,please continue.So many of your stories are good and usually make me cry,and feel a flurry of emotins.There soo good!!Please update soon!
Ugaritic Mot
2008-09-11 . chapter 9
Good work. Cant wait for the next chapter.
The chapters are a bit short, lengthening them might be a good idea.
Aisuru2
2008-08-26 . chapter 1
I thought Yugito was sealed when she was much older. Didn't you say in NBM that after she was sealed, the Nekomata took her over and killed seven people? Plus I thought she was taken back to live with her mother initially? I thought she was older than a baby because she mentions how her mother used to give her drinks for her sore throat and play games with her, implying that she was much older than an infant.
silver-eyed
2008-07-28 . chapter 9
oh, what's she got in mind? i hope the little girl gets some friends, even if it's just one more other than kumiko! keep it up!
silver-eyed
2008-03-10 . chapter 8
stupid teacher, that's really heartbreaking to read. anyway, keep it up!
Blackscarlet47
2008-03-07 . chapter 8
omg...that is so mean.
Vellor The Ancient
2008-02-13 . chapter 7
This is horribly sad, but I love it.

Good job.
silver-eyed
2008-01-27 . chapter 7
very good writing, i feel so bad for the little girl! her time in the academy's not going to be too pleasant either, is it? hmm, hope she bonds with kumiko like naruto to iruka. looking forward to more!
crazyfoxdemon
2008-01-25 . chapter 7
this story is kinda depressing. but i love it anyway. who are you gonna pair yugito with? please be naruto. please. i hope you update soon.
Blackscarlet47
2008-01-25 . chapter 7
aww...so sad...
Cooltony101neo
2008-01-09 . chapter 6
what a sad story this is, but thats what makes this story good!
silver-eyed
2008-01-09 . chapter 6
aww, is she gonna get a bento box? i'm betting she would, if not right away, then later, cuz that hawk mask lady's a sweet heart. anyway, nice writing, the descriptions are well done, really brings out emotions for the little girl.

hahha, i thought i'd give you an actual helpful review besides just saying that it's good, it seems i forget to actually help out when i review and not just drool or say yay when there's a new chapter out. so yeah, keep up the good writing, looking forward to more!
silver-eyed
2007-12-31 . chapter 5
aaww, poor girl, but i suppose she's no longer a child, huh? so is masruro gonna be taking the place of kumiko or is it just this chapter that the pov was his? anyway, looking forward to more!
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