 silver-eyed 2008-12-30 . chapter 10oh, that's so sweet of her and thoughtful too! hopefully her brother becomes her friend! yay for the update as well, it's been awhile. anyway, keep it up! XD |
 Lord of the Land of Sushi 2008-12-29 . chapter 10You make Yugito amazing, did you know that?
To be perfectly honest, your characterization of Yugito in this work and (NBM) is absolutely fantastic! Why it has so few reviews, I will never know. Your writing style is good, but it is your plot, and your ideas that are really captivating. Since there's so little canon information on Yugito, it makes her a very flexible character and you seem to be making the most of it. To be honest, I think you should switch from drabbles and outright write a Yugito-centric story. I'm usually more of a Naruto-centric story fan, or at least Naruto-has-a-major-role-in-relation-to-the-main-character fan, but I can really see a multi-chapter Yugito-centric fanfiction popping up.
Great work. Keep updating (and hopefully soon!) |
 Missy 2008-12-02 . chapter 9 Please,please,please continue.So many of your stories are good and usually make me cry,and feel a flurry of emotins.There soo good!!Please update soon! |
 Ugaritic Mot 2008-09-11 . chapter 9Good work. Cant wait for the next chapter.
The chapters are a bit short, lengthening them might be a good idea. |
 Aisuru2 2008-08-26 . chapter 1I thought Yugito was sealed when she was much older. Didn't you say in NBM that after she was sealed, the Nekomata took her over and killed seven people? Plus I thought she was taken back to live with her mother initially? I thought she was older than a baby because she mentions how her mother used to give her drinks for her sore throat and play games with her, implying that she was much older than an infant. |
 silver-eyed 2008-07-28 . chapter 9oh, what's she got in mind? i hope the little girl gets some friends, even if it's just one more other than kumiko! keep it up! |
 silver-eyed 2008-03-10 . chapter 8stupid teacher, that's really heartbreaking to read. anyway, keep it up! |
 Blackscarlet47 2008-03-07 . chapter 8omg...that is so mean. |
 Vellor The Ancient 2008-02-13 . chapter 7This is horribly sad, but I love it.
Good job. |
 silver-eyed 2008-01-27 . chapter 7very good writing, i feel so bad for the little girl! her time in the academy's not going to be too pleasant either, is it? hmm, hope she bonds with kumiko like naruto to iruka. looking forward to more! |
 crazyfoxdemon 2008-01-25 . chapter 7this story is kinda depressing. but i love it anyway. who are you gonna pair yugito with? please be naruto. please. i hope you update soon. |
 Blackscarlet47 2008-01-25 . chapter 7aww...so sad... |
 Cooltony101neo 2008-01-09 . chapter 6what a sad story this is, but thats what makes this story good! |
 silver-eyed 2008-01-09 . chapter 6aww, is she gonna get a bento box? i'm betting she would, if not right away, then later, cuz that hawk mask lady's a sweet heart. anyway, nice writing, the descriptions are well done, really brings out emotions for the little girl.
hahha, i thought i'd give you an actual helpful review besides just saying that it's good, it seems i forget to actually help out when i review and not just drool or say yay when there's a new chapter out. so yeah, keep up the good writing, looking forward to more! |
 silver-eyed 2007-12-31 . chapter 5aaww, poor girl, but i suppose she's no longer a child, huh? so is masruro gonna be taking the place of kumiko or is it just this chapter that the pov was his? anyway, looking forward to more! |