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HikaruWolf
2009-12-25 . chapter 1
Riku has excellent taste in TV shows 8D
Myffanwy
2009-11-15 . chapter 1
Why doesn't Riku being a Torchwood fan surprise me?? XD
We Welsh have the best RL slash in the world.
Anywho this was hot. You make me worshipyou. Why?
because your lemons are tasty.
>=] Take that anyway you want.

Good job.
~Myff
lexicon
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
oh em gee i loved it haha sora's so cute and riku's so hot this was awsome u should write mre lik this
XigDem Lover
2009-06-11 . chapter 1
Hehe! I've had handcuffs on before! ...Not THAT way though! Yeah, whatever...
xXxSmidgexXx
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
HeHe !more XD
XbuttonsX
2008-09-24 . chapter 1
hahaha I loved teh ending. Sora the little sneak. That would have been awkward to hear Leon and Cloud out on teh couch though. XD! Hahaha. if there ever really was a Cloud and Leon. XD! Little devil. XD! I only have one little tiny complaint. The language. I find that stories are so much better without teh use of such words as 'cock' and 'ball sac'. that can ruin amazing writers. But this was really good! I loved it!

I love house! And reading this reminded me that it is on tonight! XD! Thank you! ♥
Kittyismaster
2008-07-30 . chapter 1
meh, stopped reading half-way.

too childish for my tastes.
Oblivion Hyorinmaru
2008-04-06 . chapter 1
Lawlagee Great Story
Torchwood XD
lilly love
2008-04-02 . chapter 1
AHAHHAHAHHA lol that was awsome. good job ^-^
lloyce hunt
2008-02-27 . chapter 1
i loved the story and for your first story it was awsome! you seriously need to make another one like bad. and if you need any ideas let me know.
PsYcHoWoLfIe
2008-02-19 . chapter 1
YAYS! Yummy hot man-sex! Wow...I loved that! It's a cute pairing too (ofcourse!)
Tylida
2007-12-21 . chapter 1
Lol, cute. I loved it. Sora's such a tease. ;P
Great job! I hope to see more.
bloodlust17
2007-12-18 . chapter 1
Damn that was HOT! Great story i realy loved it.:)
NaraxKagura
2007-11-29 . chapter 1
Omg! Hahahaha so hot! Omg HOTHOTHOTHOT!

Holy crap... This is your first?

._.


If that's your first then I want to see your second and third! Heehee!

Wrote more cause that was steamy! :D
Anita Tseu
2007-11-28 . chapter 1
Awesome! ^_^ lol, Sora could have gotten out of the handcuffs then yeah? Hahaha lol.
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