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| mysterychild 2007-11-16 ch 1,  | abuseI've never been much of a kikyo fan, as I am such a gung-ho, pro canon-pairing reader. However, this story really sheds some light onto her character, and it's nice to read material in which an essential flat character is given substance without bashing. Big thumbs up. |
| ForgottenKaze 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseI like it. It was very well done. |
| LadyCash 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I like the pacing, the 'tone'. You handled the sorrow of elusive happiness very well. Good job. |
| knittingknots 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot. Kikyou's lot in life was hard, but she ended beautifully. She doesn't always get a fair shake, because they remember her earlier, when she was mostly an angry ghost in a witch made body, but she became more than that. One technical thing. This would read easier if you would consider paragraphing some of your sentences together. It's harder on the eyes this way. But I liked it! |