i thought it was realy good x well done

awesome story! Sad at the beginning but the ending made up for it! Keep writing AAML!

I LOVED YOUR STORY...IT HAD ME CONFUSED WITH THE MAILMAN BEING ASH...WOW YOUR GOOD. THIS IS A FAV!

HEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLOOOOOOO

EVERYBODY 1...2...3...

SO CUTE SO VERY VERY CUTE MAN IM NEARLY CRYING

...wait a minute...WWAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH

I AM CRYING PLEEEEASE SOMEONE GIVE ME A TISSUE

...AHHHHHHH IT WAS SOOOOOOO SWEEEEEEEEET

IM SO CHOKED UP...CANT...SPEAK...I DONT

USUALLY WATCH POKEMON ANYMORE BUT ...I CAME TO READING YOUR FANFICS AND I HAVE TO SAY...AHHHHHHHHHHHH YOU ARE SO GOOD ME LIKE YOU

ME LIKE YOU LOTS ME READ OTHER STORY ME REVIEWED

OTHER STORY ME LIKED OTHER STORY WOW IVE HAD TOO MUCH CAFFIENE(not tea or coffee IRN-BRU YUMMY!)

LISTEN THIS AINT MY WEB NAME THINGY BUT I HOPE IT

WILL BE I AM CALLING MY SELF THIS BECAUSE OF THESE NUMBERED REASONS

1. I love reading fanfics (and reviewing them)

2. I'm not allowed to tell you my real name(even tho ur dying to know _

3. I've not got my own screen name and web adress

yet ur probably thinkin shaaaaaame shame on you

but gimme a break Im only 13

4.'cos I'm a NUTTER

THERES ALL MY REASONS NOT LIKE U ALL CARE

ANYWAY...KKKKKKKEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPP WWWWWWRRRRIIIIIIIIITTTIING ME LOVE U

U R GREAT AUTHOR BETTER WRITE LOADS MORE STORIES

maybe DBZ? COS IM MAD ABOUT V/B FICS BYE BYE

Awe, that was cut. Good job!

Great story! I like the 'messenger' idea! ;) Very well written and a great Short & Sweet fic! Going to read the longer ones tomorrow, keeping the better for the end! (My philosophy of fanfic: the longer, the better!) _ You're an amazing writer, so keep writing! ;)

; Cute! I don't know why but I though the *SLAP*

SLAM

BANG

SLAM

part was hilarous...but I'm weird that way...; Okay anyway, it was cute, keep it up!

That was really good! Just like all of your other stories I've read. You are a very talented writer! *janasdestiny*

its good cute ending to

That was so Kawaii

What else can I say, but GREAT? As usual? You'll never fail to amaze and enlightened me. A very good fic, with just the right amount of emotion projected. Thumbs up.

Awwwwwwwww

it was aight(alright)

umm... nice , nice

OH...YAY! I was secretly reading this while talking to you on YIM! MWAHAHAHAH! Lol! The Almighty has created another classic ONE OF A KIND fic with a SUPERB plot line! It's goin' on my faves kiddo! Well...I noticed under the "many thanks" Neongene "pushed you to write and upload" EH? Hmm...we're pushing HIM to write and upload his! Ah, I wandered off the sub...! KEEP IT UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP! **::..Leah..::**