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sparkyCSI
2008-09-23
ch 109,
abuseI'm a bad, bad reviewer...I can't believe it taken me a week to read this...but with things with the stupid boy going so darn well (evidence a little sarcasim here), i've had to many things on my mind and Lexi seems to have taken a holiday. but bright side, 22 hours and 53 minutes until CSI: NY premires (as of the time I'm writing this).

Looking forward to a new chapter...if you have one for me!
katydid13
2008-09-21
ch 109,
abuseInteresting! I don't like this Brad fellow.
bad2wolf2mcgee
2008-09-18
ch 109,
abuseo i can sense a storyline coming on with that brad guy!yey!
can't wait for the next chapter. nice to see carmen's back to normal and happy with life. loved the dog bit 'cause i did that once at the park and the dog literaly went flying. the owner had a go at me for not looking where i was going and then some random bloke with a labrador came over and told them where to stick it which was nice of him!

thomas's no.1 fan!
Soccer-Bitch
2008-09-17
ch 109,
abuseomg! loved it as usual.
it seems like every time i think i have an idea where you are gonna go with the story, you surprise me with where you do go with it and man its so worth being wrong about it as well, lol
can't wait to read the next chapters!
Brown eyed Girl 75
2008-09-16
ch 109,
abuseGreat chapter.

Danny and Cory: I just love them and I feel so bad she has to suffer from these dreams and visions. Poor girl. He's so loving and comforting and I love seeing Danny like that.

Carmen and Flack: I love finally seeing them as a couple. Doing couple things, talking like a couple, her letting him know she loves him outside of the bedroom. I so agreed with him on that part. It was a good and realistic conversation and than followed up by a fluffy little breakfast and husband and wife talk. It was very very nice. Dick Tracy. Yes please send that DVD back ASAP.

Hm, this Brad guy. Hope he's not out to cause some major issues. Gussie and Adam do not need that.

Looking forward to more!
hope4sall
2008-09-16
ch 109,
abuseI liked this chapter very much - Stylistically I liked how it started with two sets of nightmares / dreams. I am really interested in how Taylor does pregnant and how this former patient is going to play in Gus' life. Great job!
Bluehaven4220
2008-09-16
ch 109,
abusethe animal welfare office... geez, I was laughing. Great chapter. I enjoyed it and am really excited to see what happens next *offers ice cream*
JoanneF
2008-09-14
ch 108,
abuseoh my god, it's been forever since my last review but I have been catching up and still lovin this epic. Real life does suck a bunch. Love the mom & daddy time with Carmen/Don. They needed it. This whole drama with Taylor & Matt is so sad. Poor Matt. Boo to Taylor for what she did. I wonder what happens with them now... Can't wait for the next update!
bad2wolf2mcgee
2008-09-10
ch 108,
abuseyey thomas! my little man! love the effects of alcohol on carman. can't wait for more.
Soccer-Bitch
2008-09-09
ch 108,
abuseyeah, sometimes it gets harder to handle, but can't do anything for it.

loved the chapter!
hope4sall
2008-09-09
ch 108,
abuseI really liked this chapter - Wow! So many things. I'm glad you got Cory and Danny back together. And Carm and Flack doing better but now Taylor and Matt... Sigh... Great drama and lots of intensity. I liked it!
Brown eyed Girl 75
2008-09-09
ch 108,
abuseGreat chapter! What a mix of everything! It was fab!

Danny and Cory. HOT DAMN. That was so wonderfully written and you could just feel the passion between them. I am so kicking myself that the b/f is in NYC right now because he would sure come in useful for the first time in his life. JK Colin if you happen to read this! LOL.

Thomas. God, I love that kid. He's damn adorable. Pokemon! Garratt has a Pikachu hat and jacket so that part made me grin like mad. TAke that Carmen for getting drunk and 'abusing' your man. LOL. "I'm gay, mommy!" LOL.

Taylor and Matt. Holy crap. That was intense. Hope things work out in the end for those two. And that baby!

Looking forward to another dose of my 'crack' lol
sparkyCSI
2008-09-09
ch 108,
abusedamn. Cory and Danny were so hot! okay. i'm better! this chapter really wringes the emotions out of you. first you have cory and danny making up, then you have carmen and flack snuggling but not talking about their underlining issues, then you hit us upside the board with taylor and matt!

damn. much love going out to tay and matt and i hope they get this resolved soon!
Bluehaven4220
2008-09-09
ch 108,
abuseUm... considering I'm not quite sure who this Danny Taylor guy is, since... wait, he was introduced last chapter. Ops, my bad. Sure, I guess I'm a little surprised, but what a time to drop it on him. Better than than not at all, I guess, because she'd be damned if she did and damned if she didn't either way.

Danny and Cory, yes, make up sex is the best kind of sex there is! Ha ha ha ha, precisely what they needed. Lovely job, keep it up
Bluehaven4220
2008-09-08
ch 107,
abuseI'm still here. you updated on my move-in weekend and I didn't have a computer for a while.

But anyway, I absolutely loved the chapter. Smut and alcohol make everything wonderful! Is Taylor pregnant, and if so, who's the dad? Don't leave me hanging!

Update when you can, this was amazing. Great job
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