*tries to deduce what happened*
Your style is good, but very vague, leaving the reader to piece together the clues you set on the table.
So . . . Harry's dead, right? In some sort of Voldemort-esque raid? And she's pondering . . . stuff? *shrugs* it's too cryptic. Please help me.

Hey, nice story, ur writing is great but i dnt really get wats happening here! is harry dead? Lol pretty confusing, but i lik ur style

The story is really intriguing me, about smell and human senses, but I don't understand what is happening. Where are they and does this have anything to do with DH - does it even matter where they are? I am sorry, but I don't find the key to unpuzzle this.
But: very good description and style!
Yours,
Meta