Aly has no idea how true that is...
Good job!

hehe...sneaky ally. i wonder if she ever found his collection of ears

That is really so sweet! And I love the characterisation. Really, I do.

Aww, how cute! Is this a oneshot?

I always imagined that Kally would call Jon "father" not "pa", but that was adorable anyway. For the children's part in it and then reminding us all of George's sordid past.

:D Ah, good times.

haha! Funny!

Nice~&funny.

Only problem I have is...how old are they? Cause Kally seems very young, yet she's supposed to be older than Aly (who seems slightly more mature)

Great job, very funny and cute.

lol - loved this but i think Kally was slightly ooc.

Hehe. I can see that happening! Tricky Aly. Thanks for writing! :D

good but confusing...

Aw...that was sort of sweet. Cute!

loved it!~ama

tsk-tsk! naughty aly! lol. love this! ^_^

~ Khadeejah