Great story! Personally I didn't think that he was OOC, I like him this way...keep it up!

On the contrary, I love the slightly cocky, authoritative characterization of Martin. I think it is very appropriate. All Crooked smile and slyness. Remember, he DID follow Sanguine for awhile, remember?

Terrible with sexual tension my **. XD That was awesome!

Oh, this was marvellous.

I like the little details - the freckles on his shoulders made everything ever so much more real.

And I don't think your Martin is too OOC. He did worship the Daedric Prince of Orgies after all...

Very nice work!

This is great. There aren't enough fun little vigs here, imho :D

Ahh! its soo perfect and absolutely beautiful. It was more than decent and couldn't have come at a better time.

The ending made me giggle. And I thought you wrote that pretty good, by the way. The only thing I can suggest is that you just keep at it, and try to relate it to real life. If you can't see a character doing something, others probably won't be able to, either.