Nice. I wish you would choose to update this. It's really very good-if a bit crackish.

omg i wanna read more and more, this is so funny, wanna read more!! please write it further!!

Baahahahaa!

Magnificent.

MOAR!1

thasts just so daamn cool piece if crack!

wow... just wow...

wow, i wasn't so sure about this story, but seeing how much i liked your other pieces i decided to give it a try.

i am amazed. it takes a very talented writer to make this pairing work so effortlessly and as always your writing is an absolute joy to read.

awesome.


love to see more.

I really loved this. I laughed so hard I was in tears. This was beautifully written, I'm so glad I found it.

I know you've probably abandoned this (and possibly the internet entirely), but I had to say how wonderful I think it is. Everyone's so in character and I was laughing all the way through. The dialogue is witty, the narration sparkles, and all the little details thrown in (Shunsui's outgoing mail; the punches between Yumichika and Ikkaku) made it so real!

I want to beg for you to finish this, but even if you don't/can't, it ended at a good spot and I enjoyed it anyway.

That was an absoulute /joy/ to read. I have to say, I was skeptical about the pairing - but there's nothing for you to aoplogise for - that was awesome! I love how you kept them all perfectly IC - one of the best realistic crack!fics I've ever read.

Never ever ever thought that NanaoXKenpachi pairing was possible
But you did the impossible
It was totally believable
And sweet in a totally unexpected way
Keep up the good work!

I love your story. I love your version of Zaraki Kenpachi. I even find myself liking Nanao Ise. Normally I just ignored her, but you made me interesed, and you made the pairing seem plausible.

I wish you would update. It is almost two years since your last addition and i would hate for this story to become one of the thousands that remain abandoned and unfinished.

Holy crap... Nanao and Zaraki... and you made it WORK. Kudos to you.

hahahhahah!I'm so happy I found this!! Your sense of humor and how you write is so F#@king GREAT! I found you under incandescens's favorite story list, I read Breathing Lessons and logged it under MY favorite stories list, and now I find THIS piece of art! Beautiful!

Aw.. That was so cute. Both Nanao and Kenpachi need more love. I would love to see this fic continue. Great job!

Er, I think it's the fact thatthey were CUT by the boat oar that's impressive. Most people could use it as a blunt object, but it is REALLY impressive to turn something like that into a sword. And Zaraki could probably kill someone with a mini-marshmallow if he really wanted, so the comparison is not at all fair.

Btw, any chance you might concievably update this?