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| J.L. Dexter 2006-09-09 ch 1,  | abuseWell I must declare that this is one of the better Beatrix/Steiner pieces out there! I found your style of writing rather refreshing as well as your own out-take as to Beatrix's unknown past- quite a story it was in itself too! I also found the point of the Eidolons taking back their powers from Garnet and Eiko a new twist to this tale and a very intriguing one at that too! I think your characters were all 'in,' and everything about your fic fell into place perfectly. A wonderful job and keep up the great work! |
| R 2006-08-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful, kid. Just beautiful. You've jumped right into our favorite lady general's mind. I'm-a gonna go read everything else you've ever written. |
| Myshu 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful fic. I got misty-eyed, which kinda sucks when you're trying to read because the words look all blurry, but I think it was worth it. Best characterization of Beatrix I think I've ever read (you got her voice down perfect), and best take on Steiner/Beatrix while you were at it. I don't particularly like that couple, so kudos to you for writing it into an enjoyable story. |
| celeste 2005-07-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI absolutely loved this story. I never actually gave any thought to Beatrix's past, but this made her seem so real, it was so heartbreaking and beautiful. Bravo. |
| The Coffee Goddess 2005-06-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is incredible. Beautiful, incredible, in character, well written, romantic, but not so mushy you get a cavity. Its this type of writing and authors like you that make worth coming back too. Beatrix is an amazing character and square should have spent more time on her, she is wonderful with Steiner. Good Job. Every 25 stories and you find a phenomenal author who writes a story you wish could go on forever. Write, Write on! God Bless. |
| Feyth 2004-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderfully written. You've captured Beatrix perfectly and told an amazing tale. It's simply beautiful. |
| Plug 2004-05-05 ch 1, | abuseCleverly juxtaposed. The voice of Beatrix is truly captured in this story, instilled with its essence in a way that makes the language and dialogue just flow naturally. Superb job. Cheers. |
| chocolatelova 2004-02-04 ch 1, | abuseThis story is solid - I really enjoyed reading it. I love how you fleshed out Beatrix's character and gave her a past. I'm also impressed with your portrayal of her relationship with Steiner; it's not something that I imagine many people are able to do well. Great job. |
| Digger McFoogle 2003-05-20 ch 4, | abuseGlorious. But it cant end here, oh no! x Deathy |
| Spring's Rose 2003-03-17 ch 1, | abuseAw! I love Steiner/Beatrix! My fav couple! You rule! |
| wyndnfyr 2002-12-16 ch 4, | abusethat was so sweet! OMG! its stories like this one that make me want to write my own. and about the same couple. steinatrix is my favorite pairing. prolly cuz beatrix is my favorite character. yeah so anyway. it was really good. i really enjoyed it. |
| WashedOut 2002-12-06 ch 4, | abuseVery Cute story! Hope you'll write more Steiner/Beatrix fics! Good Luck! :) |
| shadow 2002-08-15 ch 4, anon. | abusehey! nice story. had a very nice plot! excellent work! why don't you continue it? i'd love to read it if you do continue it! |
| Wravyn 2002-06-01 ch 4, | abuse*sputters* B-but...you can't end it there! Your Steiner and Beatrix are too good to lay to rest! |
| Kase 2002-03-31 ch 4, | abusethis story is really good. please write more! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE! ::gives her puppy dog eyes:: |