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Rags
2008-06-18 . chapter 12
Really excellent.
Rat
2008-03-10 . chapter 12
Great story, I love the inner conflict that Sam goes thorough, and their protectiveness towards each other. Well Done!
cmar
2008-03-07 . chapter 12
Case closed, but not exactly a happy ending. Shocking, but powerful. This was a really great horror story, inventive and very well done indeed.

I may have to rent the DVDs for Supernatural after this.
Surplus Imagination
2008-03-05 . chapter 12
I know you aren't going to leave the story at 'the end'. Just how is killing Peter supposed to get Dean out of the deal? You have way too much unexplored trama to end it here. Ruby's manipulation needs to come out.

I did feel a bit grossed out when Sam slit Peter's throat. I didn't want that to happen. I see why it's essential to your plot.

I hope you continue this. Thanks!
Ali James
2008-02-28 . chapter 1
Oh me, oh my. The first chapter and I already have goose pimples. So few people know who Ed Gein was dispite his impact on Pop culture. I can tell this is going to be a great story.

But dude when I read 'Ed Gein' shivers man shivers

take it easy
Surplus Imagination
2008-02-27 . chapter 11
Interesting story. It wasn't too gory. I did find Sam harder than usual, but it wasn't unpleasant. I liked Grace. She would be a good character to roll-off in another story.

What really hit me right was your depiction of Ruby. I'm certain there are bad twists ahead with her and Sam. I can't recall if Grace mentioned her presence to Dean.

Thanks for the story. I'll be looking forward to your conclusion.
theplanetmary
2008-02-24 . chapter 11
Aw gawd, gasoline! That ** hurts by itself! Poor Natasha. Glad the boys got her out of there in time.

Was this the last chapter? I can't remember if you said it was or not. Anyway, great work girl and I'm glad I could help you out! Luv ya babe!

(P.S.: I did end up lengthening my chapter...ALOT and worked out the kinks you pointed out to me so go check it out when you get the chance and let me know what you think. Thanks hunny!)
Danni
2008-02-13 . chapter 5
Whew, that last bit made me wince a little! And that was so cool in the hotel with Sam! Didn't see it coming.
Danni
2008-02-13 . chapter 4
Ah! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Nuff said.
Danni
2008-02-13 . chapter 3
I know I said you'd get some major long reviews, but I'm already so into the story that I'm in a hurry to read more of it! lol, I love the AMW dialogue in this, Orlando Bloom, hehe. It's funny that Dean thinks they could get Matt Damon for a reenactment on the show! And something about the way you say Dean "decided aloud" was really funny to me, I guess cause he always voices his opinions as he makes them!

I've never hunted Leatherface before!
Danni
2008-02-13 . chapter 2
Haha, Dean's so cute when he's excited. and I like the subtle thoughts of Sams about Dean too. Makes me wanna watch the special features on TCM again :D Good gross descriptions too, I can see it.
Danni
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
Had to search here for this story, just cause I wanna be able to review. I’m looking forward to reading this whole thing in ONE sitting!

This was a really creepy beginning, I liked how you-- in true Supernatural fashion-- left the boys out of the beginning and focused on the pre-story. Can't wait to read more!
cmar
2008-02-13 . chapter 10
Whew, again very suspenseful - and it's great how you make Natasha a real and sympathetic character in only a few paragraphs.

The detail and depth in the brothers' car ride is amazing - such a feel for that small-town, back-road atmosphere. I could almost see them. Can't wait for more.
cmar
2008-02-13 . chapter 9
I liked this relatively quiet chapter after all the violence and action of the previous ones. (Great stuff, by the way, I got really involved!) And I very much liked the conversation between Dean and Grace with its philosophical overtones and insight into how he feels about what he and his brother do.
theplanetmary
2008-02-11 . chapter 10
Whoo! 'Nother chapter and the boys are back in business! ...well sort of...as best as they can be all beat to hell and stuff...they've had worse!lol!
Much Luv
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