ooh, I like it so far! I had to stop reading, things kept glossing over:( I really liked how the rangers were not always repectful of Mr. Hartford. From what I have seen from OO, which as you know its not alot, that was a relief because its like they have more of a backbone maybe?

Sorry but I laughed whenver you mentioned Ra because it kept reminding me of Stargate. But anyways great job, Fran^_^

oh and-its trish by the way:)

A lot of interesting stuff going on.

hope that they conclude it. hehehehe... UPDATE SOON!

Awsome!

wow. very good chap. hehehehehehe... UPDATE SOON!

Mack no! Don't kill him!

wow. i think i see a sequel hehehehehe... and the sentinel knight might get mack. hehehehehe... UPDATE SOON!

Now its really getting interesting.

oh... things are getting interesting. hehehehehehehe... wanna know what mack will do next and what will happen to the other jewels. hehehehehe... UPDATE SOON!

Okay I understand what's going on now.But Mr. Hartford shouldn't have erased Mack's memories.

I know I'm a little behind, but really good so far. Please continue to update.

wow... good plot and chapter 4's ending is really funny. hehehehe... UPDATE SOON!

I am still so confused. But Mack better be okay!

Okay I am so confused. What the hell is going on?

What the hell is wrong with Mack?