 Nanaki Lioness 2009-08-16 . chapter 1Your way with words is incredible. I know this is old, but I couldn't resist leaving a review. This has left me speechless- thank you for sharing. |
 crimsonstain 2009-04-07 . chapter 1A well written story. Great job. |
 CrazyGirlofManyNames 2009-03-19 . chapter 1Awesomely dark and morbid story |
 Maxium 2008-11-15 . chapter 1The end is so sad! You really have a a way to convey emotions. You're really talented. |
 i AM the Random Idiot 2008-11-01 . chapter 1Utterly fascinating; a pity it's out of date (although, since it's AU, it doesn't really matter then). |
 Violet Shadows 2008-08-10 . chapter 1Good idea, put me in mind to write an itachi-centric fic though where he does try to kill the clan like in canon and fails. |
 Kyoshi7989 2008-03-20 . chapter 1This deserves so many more reviews than it got. I think everyone on must be stupid beyond compare not to read this.
First off, I love all the scenes with Uchiha Madara and Shisui. I never would have thought of tying Shishui into it; I feel like it really captured his relationship with Itachi.
Speaking of Itachi--he was just great. I wonder, what would have happened if Madara HADN'T come in contact with him? Well, sure, we all know that Itachi's just a tricky little bastard, but still...this fic really brings his personality as it is into question; especially his relationship with Sasuke.
Which reminds me: that was one of my favorite parts. How Sasuke kept coming back--haunting him, almost.
The end was perfect--how Itachi got a sort of closure and maybe peace, as well as the reader. You tied it together nicely, too--it was easier to follow than most fics containing a lot of flashbacks. (Well, I assume that's what they were. Correct me if I'm wrong.)
Overall, this is a beauitful piece, and deserves a thousand reviews for the introspective and pure genius that has gone into it. :D
Sincerely,
Kyoshi7989 |
 BitterSweet27 2008-01-25 . chapter 1Oh my god, that stuff about Mandara and Orochimaru and the body switching could be so true! This story is so sad. Sasuke dies! I love your stories, they are all so moving in different ways! I can't wait to read more that you write! |
 Obsessive Akatsuki Fan Girl 2007-12-10 . chapter 1Words cannot describe how good this was. Honestly, you should be a published author by now. The way you write is incredible and appealing. I would seriously consider, if I were you, writing something original and trying to get it published. You're style and way with words are simply stunning. |
 Illucida 2007-12-04 . chapter 1[gentle smile] Very nice. Great job. |
 une see 2007-11-30 . chapter 1I kind of loved this. Made me cry. Absolutely...perfect.
I haven't read such a good fanfic in a long time. Thank you very much for writing this. It was amazing, and very interesting.
Really sad, though. Incredibly sad. |
 Essyllus 2007-11-30 . chapter 1...ohmygosh I love Meursault. :C I've always wanted to write his archetype, his philosophy into fanfiction.
I actually haven't read it yet, but I'll PM you my review to you or something. XD |
 Orange Lantern Tsume 2007-11-15 . chapter 1Very strange, but very excellent, and I wouldn't be surprised if Kishi ended up with a similar idea in the manga. Good work. |
 Starfire201 2007-11-15 . chapter 1It's different, I'll say that. Haven't seen this take on the massacre before. |