this is hilarious!

This was awesome.

I hope I get an arthritis ray someday... except that would imply that I would get arthritis, which really isn't supposed to be fun. Nice work.

AW! this is hilarious! i love theimplied faxness. but it is jus genius, for you to think of that. they NEVER have old people save the world! (well, zorro does...but thats onl california...)

Aw! So cute and funny! Loved it!

Hahahahahaha!
Hehehehehehe!
That is the cutest and most hilarious fic I have read in a while!

That was funny!

Ha... I like it. One thing I would recommend is to write it like a script, example:
FANG: Then why worry?
MAX: It's what I do
FANG: I know.
etc...
It would just make it easier to keep track of who's talking. But great job, this is my kind of humor. :)

Haha! Aww! that was really, really cute - I could just imagine them having that converstion!

Aw...! That was so cute and funny. It's refreshing after all of these depressing fics. Not that that's a bad thing, it's just nice to have a break every once in a while. Anyway, I'm rambling... So, Bravo! :)