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Bethany89
2008-07-15
ch 1,
abuseHi, I've been reading fanfiction from this site for awhile but I just recently joined. This would also be my first review ever. I just want to say that I absolutely loved all 13 chapters. You really did create a way for Karigan and Zachary to be together that would probably work in one of the author's own books (I can only pray that it does happen). I found myself smiling the whole time and enjoying every minute that I read.
On another note, I read the comment someone else sent in saying the author doesn't like people writing fanfiction using her characters and I agree with you. If someone liked my stuff enough to write their own versions nothing would make me happier.
Anyways, I really loved your style and that you stayed true to the characters. I look foward to reading more of your stories.
Miko-Snow Goddess-Me
2008-05-30
ch 13,
abuseWow, an amazing story. I loved it.
Meghan Jend
2008-03-17
ch 13, anon.
abuseThis story is brilliant! Not only does it capture my interest, it follows the style of Kristen Britian's writing so well. Honestly i was drawn into the story as well as maybe even more so then the actually Green Rider Series. Thank You
hazelelf1183
2008-03-11
ch 13,
abusewhat an amazing read.
LorilieDorran
2008-02-25
ch 13,
abuseGreat ending, very well done!
LorilieDorran
2008-02-25
ch 12,
abuseVery nice - as always :)
LightningStorms
2008-02-19
ch 13,
abusei liked it! will you please write a sequal? please!1
LadyRose14
2008-02-16
ch 3, anon.
abuseIf you have the need to write, then write.

I, above all. enjoy reading fan fics.
NebulaSpider
2008-02-15
ch 13,
abuseI love the epilogue - it was very much in character with the books so far and a wonderful end to your story. I enjoyed reading it very much!
Ms Urania
2008-02-15
ch 13,
abuseBravo...but am I pervert for wishing there had been a bit more about the, um, wedding night? *blushes* OK, I know it's naughty but we've all been waiting to see them get together for so long.

It's been a great story and you tied up all the various threads very well (except Alton kind of disappeared!). I loved how you fleshed out Willis and Fastion. That was a hilarious and fitting ending to the story with Agemon and that last line was perfect.
WishfulThought
2008-02-14
ch 13,
abuseLol! I love the epilogue! That was perfect!
Eithne
2008-02-14
ch 13, anon.
abuseIt would be lovely if this happened!

aw! *sigh sniff*!
RiderTwilightOban
2008-02-13
ch 13,
abuseAwesome story, Lady! Hope to see more great plot lines and such from you!
Sirius7
2008-02-13
ch 13,
abuseGotta love Agemon. Wonderful ending, my friend... now, which of your other stories comes next?
Skavnema
2008-02-13
ch 13,
abuseI actually was wondering if you forgot about me -_-' This really was great ^^ and very cute and awesome. I loved how you ended it with Agemon. It was a bit funny and sweet. Now, having nothing to do with GreenRider or the fic- your shirt pic has been done for a LONG time XD
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