this was actually well thought out and well written.

Poor Heather. I can relate to that awkwardness she feels, and you described it so well.

I was hoping to see crazy Rhonda in the story, too. :)

Nice work!

Fuck you bitch, where's the porn?

OMG. This was so amazing!

Gah, so so good. Are you going to add more?

This is no big deal. You are not into Sarah, and you’re just going to sleep next to each other innocently like kids do. You won’t touch her. You won’t act weird. Just be normal.

-Hehee, that made me laugh. I felt so bad for Heather and her inner ramblings and what not.

I really love this pairing, and I get excited when I come across any fics with it; saying that, I especially like this fic, well written, and in character!

That was very nice and sweet. God, how I wished those two would hook up last season. Maybe next season... until then, there's always fanfic. Hope to see more from you. A sequel perhaps? Or is this just the first chapter of a longer story?

keep it up :)