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| Lady Suneidesis 2008-01-23 ch 3,  | abuseOk, so this is incredibly late, but better late than never, right? Loved this story - completely loved it. Everyone was very in-character. It was also neat to see MJ's father in it - I've rarely read anything with him as a main character. The character development and the back story for Phil felt real and fleshed him out as a human, not just some obscure reference. Awesome work! ~Lady Sun |
| CamFan4Ever 2007-11-22 ch 3, | abuseAmazing ending, loved it. |
| Jeanniestorm 2007-11-22 ch 3, | abuseAs horrible as MJ's father is you made me dislike him a little less at the end which was heartwarming. Mr. Watson being too dense and proud to realize that he was being extremely lightly beaten up by someone he deemed as weak was very funny. |
| Armida 2007-11-20 ch 2, | abuseI started off thinking what a jerk Mary Jane's father was and you managed to make him sympathetic. Good job tying this in with Daredevil. Looking forward to more. |
| CamFan4Ever 2007-11-18 ch 2, | abuseWow... Amazing chapter. Can't wait for more. |
| Mark C 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseAww, Thanksgiving with the family is always interesting especially one involving Mary Jane's family. I can understand MJ's mixed emotions because who knows what can happen with her father there. At least she has her mom, May and Peter to help her cope. Loved the Spider-Man balloon during Macy's parade, there is no way you can have that parade without the webheaded balloon. I think it was nice to hear that MJ's mom appreciates what Spider-Man does for the city. That probably warmed her daughter's heart to hear that because that is who MJ is going to marry. The ending was perfect because you just had the feeling that once the song was over or near an end, MJ's dad would be there. It will be interesting to see what he does when he goes inside the apartment. Great job, ladies. |
| CamFan4Ever 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseOh wow... Amazing start, can't wait for more! |
| Spiderswing432 2007-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good. |