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Reviews for: Outside That Room
Aloha.Laney
2008-01-08 . chapter 2
Hallo!
I think this is also a good ending!
It don't has to be always a big romance... I like it that they're just friends (yet!)...
It is really funny and cute (e.g.: siblings; cosplayer;...)!
And it is a great idea to let them be actors and the other story a movie!
Nice work! Can't wait to read more!
Cute23Flower
2008-01-08 . chapter 2
Great! This ending was a little confusing at first, but then I understood everything! Keep writing! So far, my favorite ending was the first!
Saint Dezzie
2008-01-07 . chapter 2
Geez, you really know a lot about Japan, ne? but omg Ueno IS fun though. This ending was really cute though! It would have surprised me loads of this were the intended ending for In That Room but to be honest I'm glad it left off where it actually did. Great job! Can't wait to read more endings.
Aloha.Laney
2008-01-04 . chapter 1
Nice ending!
On one side they found each other but on the other side they don't know it... So, on one side I'm happy they're together and on the other side I'm kinda sad that they don't know...
But it's a good one!
I'm excited to read more of them!!
Cute23Flower
2008-01-04 . chapter 1
That was so unpredictable! It's actually a bit confusing. Please update soon. I can't wait to see other endings!
megan0307
2007-12-18 . chapter 1
Hmm...so they are dreaming about each other and not realizing it...looking for someone they've already found...very interesting. Good story, I'm intrigued to see what other possible endings you may come up with.
Chire
2007-11-26 . chapter 1
Haha thats kinda funny! xD

I like this ending, its so cute! Can wait for more!
al2010
2007-11-16 . chapter 1
Cute ending. I can't wait to read more of the endings. Please update.
HollyStorytellerRissaStarling
2007-11-15 . chapter 1
I love that it's Sakur married to Neji, and that's who she's been dreaming about! A little predictable, no offense. XD

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