 punkballet 2008-07-01 . chapter 1I was like What? And then I was like, wait...what??
AKA: I loved it. |
 beerwench1313 2007-11-24 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this story. I haven't seen the episode yet, but I am really excited to see how this fits into it. By the way I noticed that your blood type stats are off. AB and moire specifically AB- is the least common. According to the Red Cross, these are the breakdown of blood types donated.
O + 40%
O - 7%
A + 32%
A - 5%
B + 11%
B - 1.5%
AB + 3%
AB - .05%
Other than that I really liked it and look forward to more of your stories (especially if they add DL goodness to the episodes!) |
 The Little Corinthian 2007-11-18 . chapter 1Aw, cute. And I agree, TPTB are letting a bunch of opportunities for some great D/L moments dance right by them. Stupid people. Oh well, that's why we've got you to fill us in on what we missed :0) Very nice! |
 Lerrinus 2007-11-16 . chapter 1Whew! Need a cold shower now, that was great! Loved the remark about the bunny ears! :-) |
 dustie-snark 2007-11-16 . chapter 1Great story! I thought TPTB were missing out on a few "moments" as well, and I'm glad you remedied that problem. :o) |
 A.Boleyn 2007-11-16 . chapter 1Aww, so sweet. :) I'm glad you were able to put a shippy spin on this, since the episode itself missed that. I like how you bring out Danny's mushy, sweet side. The one we all know he has! ;) |
 TatianaMik 2007-11-16 . chapter 1I love it. That's a wonderful ending of the episode. |
 Fan39 2007-11-16 . chapter 1Loved that story, I like when fans write something that could easily happen after each show! We just can't see it! Well not without wonderful writers like yourself that is!!
Thanks! |
 MissAusten 2007-11-15 . chapter 1very nice! definitely should have been in the episode! |
 sparkyCSI 2007-11-15 . chapter 1Nice! |
 nyakattia 2007-11-15 . chapter 1Lovely! I like how you've kept the story in context with the other episodes and with your other stories, too. You know, great minds think alike because I had nearly exactly the same idea after seeing that part. I won't write it though. You've more than covered it, and I am far to bogged down writing NaNoWriMo and three CSI NY fanfics (and editing a forth) to even consider any more story ideas until at least December!
Well done! |
 wjobsessed 2007-11-15 . chapter 1I'm so glad you picked up on this because I thought the same thing. I thought Carmine G.'s expressions were very good in the hospital while the boyfriend emoted. To me his look said "What if that were Lindsay?"
This was a great little oneshot. Thanks :) |
 Spontaneity 2007-11-15 . chapter 1rawr. very nice. |
 justawritier 2007-11-15 . chapter 1aw. so cute! |
 JESSMARY25 2007-11-15 . chapter 1I am such a fan of your post-episode stories, this is not the exception.
Awesome! |