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| beerwench1313 2007-11-24 ch 1,  | abuseI really enjoyed this story. I haven't seen the episode yet, but I am really excited to see how this fits into it. By the way I noticed that your blood type stats are off. AB and moire specifically AB- is the least common. According to the Red Cross, these are the breakdown of blood types donated. O + 40% O - 7% A + 32% A - 5% B + 11% B - 1.5% AB + 3% AB - .05% Other than that I really liked it and look forward to more of your stories (especially if they add DL goodness to the episodes!) |
| The Little Corinthian 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseAw, cute. And I agree, TPTB are letting a bunch of opportunities for some great D/L moments dance right by them. Stupid people. Oh well, that's why we've got you to fill us in on what we missed :0) Very nice! |
| Lerrinus 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseWhew! Need a cold shower now, that was great! Loved the remark about the bunny ears! :-) |
| dustie-snark 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! I thought TPTB were missing out on a few "moments" as well, and I'm glad you remedied that problem. :o) |
| A.Boleyn 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseAww, so sweet. :) I'm glad you were able to put a shippy spin on this, since the episode itself missed that. I like how you bring out Danny's mushy, sweet side. The one we all know he has! ;) |
| TatianaMik 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseI love it. That's a wonderful ending of the episode. |
| Fan39 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseLoved that story, I like when fans write something that could easily happen after each show! We just can't see it! Well not without wonderful writers like yourself that is!! Thanks! |
| MissAusten 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abusevery nice! definitely should have been in the episode! |
| sparkyCSI 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseNice! |
| nyakattia 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseLovely! I like how you've kept the story in context with the other episodes and with your other stories, too. You know, great minds think alike because I had nearly exactly the same idea after seeing that part. I won't write it though. You've more than covered it, and I am far to bogged down writing NaNoWriMo and three CSI NY fanfics (and editing a forth) to even consider any more story ideas until at least December! Well done! |
| wjobsessed 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseI'm so glad you picked up on this because I thought the same thing. I thought Carmine G.'s expressions were very good in the hospital while the boyfriend emoted. To me his look said "What if that were Lindsay?" This was a great little oneshot. Thanks :) |
| Spontaneity 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuserawr. very nice. |
| justawritier 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseaw. so cute! |
| JESSMARY25 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseI am such a fan of your post-episode stories, this is not the exception. Awesome! |
| katydid13 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseVery cute!! Is it odd that I don't know my own blood type? |