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| madd09 2008-06-14 ch 8,  | abuseGREAT STORY IT ROCKED |
| Owl Emporium 2008-06-04 ch 8, | abuseHey, that was great! I loved it; great job! :) Angelica |
| Owl Emporium 2008-06-04 ch 6, | abuseThat was great! I loved it loads, great great job so far! :) Angelica |
| Kriti 2008-06-02 ch 8, anon. | abuseoverall it was a nice fic to read but i found quite a few inconsistencies...specially the fact that booth miraculously recovered within almost an hour of him waking up-that was really really wierd...he shudn't have been able to get out of bed after the doctors checked up on him or let parker jump into his lap etc...the second half of the story just didn't seem to flow well in general...however i did particularly the dynamics u tried to create between bones and parker...they could definatly have been explored more,n were a little rough on the edges but all that u already gave us,it was cute!parker is always fun to read in stories... this was a very very good attempt and i really liked the idea n the plot but the story in terms of language,dialogues and scene format needs brushing up... ..i hope u take this in good humour and that i didn't come across as maybe rude or anything...i just wanted to give an honest opinion... ..i did enjoy reading the fic!i'll look forward to more work from u! |
| FF.netfanHANNAH 2008-06-02 ch 8, | abuseGreat. Love the ending. keep on typing * hannah * |
| flanmaja 2008-06-02 ch 8, | abuseamazing chapter. it was so cute!! thank you so much for writing this fic. loved this story very much. thanks again! |
| Honeykit13 2008-06-01 ch 8, | abusethat was cute. i love parker! hes just a little cutie! |
| RavensIvy 2008-06-01 ch 8, | abuseLovely story. I loved the marry me scene it was so cute! And now, you get cookies from me as a reader for writing the BB awesomeness xD *gives cookie* |
| Hazmatt 2008-06-01 ch 8, | abuseGreat chapter! I really enjoyed it! Wonderful, to whole story too! Are you sure it's finished, that there's not going to be anymore? The ending screams to have more! Will there be a sequel? Please? |
| Sarah 2008-06-01 ch 8, anon. | abuseGreat ending on The Right Decision?. I was a little disapointed that Rebecca woke up, becuase I just don't like Rebecca. Other than that, Fantastic job. Congratulations on completing your first fanfic. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. |
| glenda lefeber 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abusegreat story please keep it going |
| HawkAngel XD 2008-06-01 ch 8, anon. | abuseme again, and by next chapter, I mean, and epilogue with the wedding... aww that would be so cute... please... hope you can do it... HawkA. |
| HawkAngel XD 2008-06-01 ch 8, | abuseaw... really cute chap... update soon please HawkAngel |
| FF.netfanHANNAH 2008-05-18 ch 7, | abuseShock, horror, then a resounding YES. Sorry, I just had to say that. Love this fic so far, dunno why it took me so long to read it. keep on typing * hannah * |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-16 ch 7, | abuseGreat chapter! I love it! I can't wai to read more! I totally think that she should say yes! That would be awesome! |