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| ncisabbylover 2008-06-01 ch 7,  | abusewoo update yeah. great chapter and i can't wait for more love abbylover |
| Bec0512 2008-05-31 ch 7, | abuseDamn thier moment being ruined, but another great chapter. :) |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2008-05-31 ch 7, | abuseOh, that's just PERFECT! Louie Messer and evil teenage!Flack. Two perfect anatagonists. I'll insert it- dun dun dun! Wow, that was great. Looking forward to more. |
| gwen24 2008-05-31 ch 7, | abuseglad you updated. you're leaving us with suspense. not for too long i hope.;) boy does Adam have bad timing!lol |
| Susan1302 2008-05-04 ch 6, | abuseYOU UPDATED :D:D I like the way you pounded yourself out of the corner. I don't know what to say more. I like it. And good luck with the awards! |
| LiaBelle 2008-05-03 ch 6, | abusei love this so far! i especially like the way you've worked in all the other characters... they all seem to fit. i have a few questions though. do you really think adam is gay or are you just saying that for the sake of the story? and, are you going to work mac, stella and hawkes in? |
| JESSMARY25 2008-05-02 ch 6, | abuseYou have no idea how I missed this fic. Thanks for updating. :) I love teenage DL; you have done an awesome job with their development. Papa Messer is an interesting character, I want to know more. |
| gwen24 2008-04-30 ch 6, | abusethat was worth the wait!! definitely worth it!! i'm so glad you updated. but don't take as long to update again, please.:D;) |
| laurzz 2008-04-30 ch 6, | abuseIt was well worth the wait. :) I especially liked Lindsay's "I heart organised crime" funny. lol Ah, good, i'm glad your nominated. i was going to head over there to nominate the "Messer 5" fic! :) |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2008-04-30 ch 6, | abuseFirst off, congratulations on your nominations! I was hoping someone would put you up! Which stories are you nominated with? I am very excited to see this story back in production. Thank your sledgehammer for me! I'm excited about Danny and Lindsay mostly figuring things out...but I'm worried what Danny's got himself in to with his 'delivery' job, and what Don Flack, Villain has planned next... I can't get over Adam The Theatre Geek. Hilarious. By the way, thanks for tossing my stories into the nominations. Where do we go to check the nominations out? I read the little proposal thing when it popped up, but haven't seen anything since. |
| dana flame princess 2008-01-05 ch 5, | abuseReally nice story :) |
| NYCarbon 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is an awesome fic! Its completely different from the TV show! I love it! The way you used lines from the song and pattern the paragraph with it was great! Can't wait to read the special part you told me about :) |
| Pedroia the Destroya 2007-12-19 ch 5, | abuseI love it Update really soon. Add more Louie and Adam and Flack!! ;) |
| mojo128 2007-12-19 ch 5, | abusei love this story! plz update soon :) |
| JESSMARY25 2007-12-13 ch 5, | abuseAww. I love the chapter! Their time with Amy was heartwarming, it shows that Lindsay can get pass it and that Danny wants to share the two most important people in his life. It took me by surprise that you had Danny telling Lindsay that Amy was the best thing that ever happened to him and not her, but I ended up liking it 'cause Danny was honest when he could have easily lied in order to be romantic. Anyways, awesome chapter... please update soon. |